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First and Last date

The space between us is becoming tense I smile to reassure you The waiter’s hands are clenched With impatience, he looks at you You look at me I want to flee It’s obvious there won’t be a second date Please believe it was a mistake I forgot my wallet on our first date

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/30/2012 6:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Francine's "Humor Me" contest Maina. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/19/2012 2:38:00 PM
Maina.. congratulations with your poem... always~ :-) PD
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Date: 11/18/2012 10:26:00 AM
you sure did a good job portraying that situation!!! Congrats on your win with this amusing poem, maina.
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Date: 11/18/2012 8:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Maina, don't forget it next time lol xx
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Date: 11/18/2012 7:49:00 AM
Been there and it isn't funny LOL is it?Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 11/18/2012 5:10:00 AM
awwwww. Loved the read Maina....Seren
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Date: 11/17/2012 10:31:00 PM
congrats on your 4th place win in the contest Maina
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Date: 8/14/2011 6:31:00 AM
Great write Maina, very witty... ....smiles...chiquita
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Date: 7/21/2011 9:21:00 AM
Maina, Beautiful, Good to see you near the top spot. "Congratulations" Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/21/2011 7:30:00 AM
Wow, Thank you all for reading and commenting on my poem you are an encouragement. I will continue posting more and more.
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Date: 7/21/2011 7:18:00 AM
hehe, shame hopefully you were forgiven :) Congratulations on your win Maina :)
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Date: 7/21/2011 6:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Maina. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/21/2011 6:22:00 AM
Congrats Maina on your fantastic win with this dynamic delight in poetry .. enjoy luv..
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