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Firing Off

In the heat of passion. The words are fired off. Spewing them randomly, with indifference and feeling Spiritually bitten, with venom induced systemically Spouting hatred has done them in, firing off yet again. Randomly spewing with indifference, and feeling Angry on this land, they spoke this language Firing off. Yet again has spouting hatred done them in? The ship began to sink, it was just then too late, Randomly spewing with indifference, and feeling? Spiritually bitten with venom. Induced systemically, It was just too late then. The ship began to sink. In the heat of passion. The words are fired off.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/10/2011 10:11:00 PM
I like it. I went to the "forms of poetry" on this site and learned from there.I think..good luck.
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Date: 7/9/2011 8:38:00 PM
SICKNESS! I LOVE IT! HENCE, ALL CAPS! - KYLE!
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