Line Gauthier Poet Monorhyme

Fireworks of Polka Dots

Twirling in a sea of polka dots
Blinded by a million zillion watts
He sees before him blinking spots
And there a field of forget-me-nots
A parading unicorn proudly trots
Leading a caravan of baby ocelots
Prancing through a hundred jolly tots
While exploding fireworks burst in shots
The evil queen she rots she squats
As her malefic revenge she plots
While he leisurely plays casino slots
His stomach churns all in knots
You see he has for you the hots
He’ll go he has his choice of yachts



AP: Honorable Mention 2020

Submitted on January 8, 2019 for contest POLKA DOTS sponsored by EDWARD IBEH  -  RANKED 2ND

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Timothy Mcguire January 22, 2019 at 11:37 PM Love it! Line Gauthier January 23, 2019 at 4:59 AM Thanks, Timothy. Much appreciated.

Edward Ibeh January 22, 2019 at 5:23 PM Congratulations on your win in my contest, Line!:) An amazing monorhyme! Line Gauthier January 23, 2019 at 5:00 AM Thank you so much, Edward. A fun contest.

Caren Krutsinger January 8, 2019 at 9:38 PM A monorhyme wow - I love the cadence of it, and the beats. I was counting the beats the first three lines, then I got caught up and just allowed myself to fully enjoy it! Line Gauthier January 8, 2019 at 9:40 PM Thanks for your delightful visit and compliment, Caren.

Ilene Bauer January 8, 2019 at 2:32 PM delightful! Line Gauthier January 8, 2019 at 4:00 PM Thanks for your lovely visit and compliment, Ilene.