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Fireworks of Polka Dots

Twirling in a sea of polka dots Blinded by a million zillion watts He sees before him blinking spots And there a field of forget-me-nots A parading unicorn proudly trots Leading a caravan of baby ocelots Prancing through a hundred jolly tots While exploding fireworks burst in shots The evil queen she rots she squats As her malefic revenge she plots While he leisurely plays casino slots His stomach churns all in knots You see he has for you the hots He’ll go he has his choice of yachts AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted on January 8, 2019 for contest POLKA DOTS sponsored by EDWARD IBEH - RANKED 2ND

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Timothy Mcguire

Date: 1/22/2019 11:37:00 PM

Love it!

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/23/2019 4:59:00 AM

Thanks, Timothy. Much appreciated.

Edward Ibeh

Date: 1/22/2019 5:23:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in my contest, Line!:) An amazing monorhyme!

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/23/2019 5:00:00 AM

Thank you so much, Edward. A fun contest.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/8/2019 9:38:00 PM

A monorhyme wow - I love the cadence of it, and the beats. I was counting the beats the first three lines, then I got caught up and just allowed myself to fully enjoy it!

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/8/2019 9:40:00 PM

Thanks for your delightful visit and compliment, Caren.

Ilene Bauer

Date: 1/8/2019 2:32:00 PM

delightful!

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/8/2019 4:00:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely visit and compliment, Ilene.