Fireworks

We gape at the sky
this Fourth of July,
as rockets ignite
to deal us delight,
while strangers unite.

I’m such a dope,
it gives me hope
that Nations torn
can be reborn.

Let God’s gifts
heal our rifts,
our esprit.

Let’s pray
we stay

free.


July 4, 2022
Diminished Hexaverse Poetry Contest Sponsored by Caren Krutsinger
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022


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Date: 6/5/2024 10:34:00 AM
So many things seem to divide us these days, but something simple like fireworks can bring us back together... I really enjoyed reading this one, Eric, with the 4th of July only about a month away... Really great work!
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Eric Cohen
Date: 6/5/2024 4:47:00 PM
Thanks, Kelly. Almost July 4th once again ...
Date: 3/5/2023 2:26:00 AM
Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. We don't know what the future holds and will issue out for our country. Sara
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Date: 7/26/2022 2:49:00 PM
All this division of pitting one side against the other I believe is having the opposite effect. It is actually bringing each side closer to God. Our nation was born and freed by the war of independence. Let us celebrate and keep it that way. A Fave and a wonderful poem my friend. Blessings xxoo
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Eric Cohen
Date: 7/27/2022 1:09:00 PM
So glad to hear you like this. Thanks.
Date: 7/25/2022 12:11:00 PM
Amin to that... Very well penned... Blessings
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Eric Cohen
Date: 7/25/2022 12:21:00 PM
Thanks, Paghunda.
Date: 7/9/2022 10:01:00 PM
Eric, it's good to once again partake of your magical poetic touch. I think this is a great message for July 4th; like you, I am a dope with hope. All my best ~ John
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Eric Cohen
Date: 7/10/2022 6:11:00 PM
No one here but us dopes. Thanks for the visit and all the best to you, too, John.
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