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Written on July 22, 2023

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When you look back, remembering us, The way we were – in faded photographs, Yesterday’s dreams like pieces of a puzzle Pressed into the heart and soul, erasing Melancholy and doubt, replacing the fears With tenderness and even, at times, tears… When you look back, reminiscing – pondering On yesterday, when our paths crossed – At first, just stars in the night, reflecting the light Who trembles with hope, eager for the wonder Of a feeling, a recognition between two hearts, Two souls who see the joy, the smile, the knowing… That comes from the memories, the dreamy-eyed Celebrations of what once was our life, our yesterday Secreted just beneath the moments, glistening Like fireflies on the summer night, whispering inside, Revealing the moments who shine so bright, tell-tale Signs that we knew more than we thought we knew… Our hearts, just two hearts who knew the beautiful That comes from loving unconditionally, With a love that is like light – falling across shadows, Reassuring, comforting and gentle – achingly sentimental When I look back, I see us and remember – feel the beautiful That comes from knowing we knew the truth, Love like this is a gift from heaven – love like this is so very special Thank you, honey… for so many memories! I loved you then and I love you today… more than I ever did!

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Date: 12/7/2023 6:40:00 PM
Dear Gina, I adore your passionate love poem, and especially, your recitation of it. Beautiful feelings expressed in lush romantic imagery "With a love that is like light – falling across shadows,/Reassuring, comforting and gentle – achingly sentimental" - precious! Congratulations for your excellent win in Ink Empress's contest with this tender exquisite expression of love. Warmest wishes and hugs, my sweet friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 12/7/2023 7:42:00 AM
Dear Regina, Congratulations. Your poem is a tender reflection on the enduring nature of love, capturing the essence of cherished memories and the warmth they continue to bring. It’s a heartfelt tribute to the timeless bond shared and the gratitude for the love that grows stronger with each passing day. - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 12/7/2023 4:19:00 AM
Great choice for this contest and you read it so well.. I think that is the first time I have heard your voice... but, you sound American, I thought you were from South Africa? Or am I confused lol..
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Date: 12/7/2023 1:32:00 AM
Wow gina, i didnt know you did spoken word, i listened to the spoken word and also read the poem and i was truly in awe. I felt the love and emotions flowing throughout this, i can understand why this is close to your heart. I love every word in this and it flows just seamlessly. Thank you for supporting my contest. Congratulations on your well deserved win
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Date: 12/7/2023 12:49:00 AM
Congrats again, on your well deserved win in Empress's contest. Best wishes. Wen
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Date: 8/26/2023 8:17:00 PM
A superb poem superbly read. Congratulations Gina
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Date: 8/26/2023 11:55:00 AM
Wow this is absolutely stunning , well deserved win. I love the imagery flowing in such eloquence and its beautifully read. Congratulations
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Date: 8/26/2023 10:54:00 AM
Congratulations for your placement in the "Let There Be Voice" contest. I really enjoyed reading AND hearing your wonderful poem voiced! Cheers and Best Wishes.
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Date: 7/23/2023 5:31:00 AM
Awesome poem on love, Gina:)
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Date: 7/22/2023 8:20:00 AM
aww Regina this is just such a glorious descriptive romantic poem, I hope your hubby loves it as much as I do - a HUGE fave:-) hugs Jan xx
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