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Firefly Poises On Steeple Leaf

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Specks of fire flies by Flickering amid shadows, Glimmering fireflies. Lone vibrant beacon poises On steeple leaf in darkness. 3/9/2022 'Firefly Tanka ' Contest Sponsored By: JCB Brul

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/29/2022 7:51:00 AM

Congrats on your winner. Way to go. I like the very distinctive description you have penned. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/17/2022 10:15:00 PM

It's so nice to read your entry, Eve. Big congrats for your win.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/17/2022 9:23:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A pretty write/picture. Nature at work in the night sky. Today, be blessed with your win....................

Christuraj Alex

Date: 3/17/2022 4:39:00 AM

"Lone vibrant beacon poises" - Beautifully written. Congratulations!

Howard Kerr

Date: 3/16/2022 11:29:00 PM

Eve, This is a credit to you. It creates a very vivid image. Well done. Howard

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/16/2022 10:14:00 AM

Congratulations on your first-place contest win. You deserve it with this splendid and well-crafted Tanka.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/15/2022 11:58:00 AM

love the alliterative touches too Eve.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 3/10/2022 8:42:00 PM

Absolutely stunning, Eve:)

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 3/9/2022 11:38:00 PM

You captured the beauty of specks of fire very nicely, Eve.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/9/2022 10:22:00 PM

Great imagery, Eve. Well done. Hugs.

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 3/9/2022 10:19:00 PM

Lovely Eve! The imagery painted was such a joy, and the picture you shared is so perfect to accompany your poem. It is such a peaceful work of joy <3 ~BJ