Firefly

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Firefly in rouge, dusk flames, Flying in charmed wonder; Famed since glad childish days Fast moving, slow blinking, Fanatic of cream moon. Fervency of summer, Fuchsia night green stunner!

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/2/2023 7:07:00 AM

You are great at writing pleiades! The charm of the “rouge, dusk flames” and the contrast of “ Fast moving, slow blinking” and the colors pop. Hugs ~ Kim

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/2/2023 11:38:00 AM

Thank you for the delight of your kind comments, Kim. Hugs, Evelyn

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 9/14/2023 12:04:00 PM

Lovely imagery. Congratulations Evelyn! :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/14/2023 12:22:00 PM

Thank you very much, Linda. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/14/2023 11:02:00 AM

- Congrats on your win, Evelyn :) - hugs

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/14/2023 12:17:00 PM

Thank you so much. :) hugs

Joe Dimino

Date: 9/14/2023 7:30:00 AM

I know the science, but the light still seems magical to me -- poetry, our fireflies of words. Well done my friend.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/14/2023 12:08:00 PM

I know how you feel, Joe. The wonder of fireflies has never left me, since I first discovered them, as a small child. Thank you so much for your thoughts. :)