Laura Leiser Poet Pleiades

Firefly

Fairy lights of insects
        Fascinate the senses
                 Flaring in the nighttime 
                             Feel the magic moment 
                 Filagree wings in flight
         Flitting in a bright dance
Free flow sparks of wonder.










Written on 9/12/2023

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Suzanne Delaney October 8, 2023 at 6:21 PM Wow. I love this one Laura: Into my favs. It is beautiful. SuZ Laura Leiser October 9, 2023 at 9:13 AM Thank you, Suzanne! So glad you liked this one, and thanks for the fave! :)

Karen Jones September 23, 2023 at 1:55 PM The last line is my favorite. Wonderful poem and belated congrats! Laura Leiser September 24, 2023 at 9:22 PM Thank you, Karen! Glad you liked this one. :)

Christina Bowring September 18, 2023 at 7:09 AM This is a delightful, well written Pleiades Laura. Beautiful, chosen words. ‘Flitting in a bright dance, Free flow sparks of wonder’. Just wonderful. Really enjoyed it. Many congratulations on your worthy win. :):) Laura Leiser September 19, 2023 at 5:45 PM Thanks so much, Christina. Glad you liked this one! :)

Terry Flood September 15, 2023 at 3:23 PM Very much enjoyed this, Laura. Congrats on your win Laura Leiser September 19, 2023 at 5:44 PM Thanks so much, Terry! :)

The Situation September 14, 2023 at 7:11 PM We had such fun catching them. A wondeful reminder Laura Leiser September 14, 2023 at 7:30 PM Thank you, Situation. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen September 14, 2023 at 10:45 AM - It's magical, Laura ... lovely written :) - Congrats on your win :) - hugs Laura Leiser September 14, 2023 at 6:58 PM Thanks so much as always, Anne-Lise! :)

Joanna Daniel September 14, 2023 at 7:09 AM Wow! Brilliant, Laura, congratulations:) Laura Leiser September 14, 2023 at 6:58 PM Thanks so much, Joanna. I’m glad you liked this one! :)

Joseph May September 14, 2023 at 6:55 AM Wonderful write Laura, Congrats on your win

Ink Empress September 14, 2023 at 6:55 AM This is absolutely stunning well deserved win really. I especially love “ filagree wings in flight” “ fitting in a bright dance” ah so very creative how you’ve done this pleiades. So glad i saw this. Congratulations. A new fave for me Laura Leiser September 14, 2023 at 6:57 PM You are too kind, Ink Impress! I thank you for the high praise and fave! :)

Silent One September 14, 2023 at 6:51 AM I saw so many with similar words, but yours is so unique and different.. I love this one, you used the theme so well.. Laura Leiser September 14, 2023 at 6:57 PM Thank you, Silent! I’m so happy you enjoyed my little poem! :)

Janice Canerdy September 13, 2023 at 7:07 AM Laura, this is a wonderful, lovely, creative piece! Janice Laura Leiser September 14, 2023 at 6:55 PM Thank you, Janice! So happy you liked this! :)