Firefly

Fairy lights of insects Fascinate the senses Flaring in the nighttime Feel the magic moment Filagree wings in flight Flitting in a bright dance Free flow sparks of wonder. Written on 9/12/2023

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Suzanne Delaney

Date: 10/8/2023 6:21:00 PM

Wow. I love this one Laura: Into my favs. It is beautiful. SuZ

Laura Leiser
Date: 10/9/2023 9:13:00 AM

Thank you, Suzanne! So glad you liked this one, and thanks for the fave! :)

Karen Jones

Date: 9/23/2023 1:55:00 PM

The last line is my favorite. Wonderful poem and belated congrats!

Laura Leiser
Date: 9/24/2023 9:22:00 PM

Thank you, Karen! Glad you liked this one. :)

Christina Bowring

Date: 9/18/2023 7:09:00 AM

This is a delightful, well written Pleiades Laura. Beautiful, chosen words. ‘Flitting in a bright dance, Free flow sparks of wonder’. Just wonderful. Really enjoyed it. Many congratulations on your worthy win. :):)

Laura Leiser
Date: 9/19/2023 5:45:00 PM

Thanks so much, Christina. Glad you liked this one! :)

Terry Flood

Date: 9/15/2023 3:23:00 PM

Very much enjoyed this, Laura. Congrats on your win

Laura Leiser
Date: 9/19/2023 5:44:00 PM

Thanks so much, Terry! :)

The Situation

Date: 9/14/2023 7:11:00 PM

We had such fun catching them. A wondeful reminder

Laura Leiser
Date: 9/14/2023 7:30:00 PM

Thank you, Situation. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/14/2023 10:45:00 AM

- It's magical, Laura ... lovely written :) - Congrats on your win :) - hugs

Laura Leiser
Date: 9/14/2023 6:58:00 PM

Thanks so much as always, Anne-Lise! :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/14/2023 7:09:00 AM

Wow! Brilliant, Laura, congratulations:)

Laura Leiser
Date: 9/14/2023 6:58:00 PM

Thanks so much, Joanna. I’m glad you liked this one! :)

Ink Empress

Date: 9/14/2023 6:55:00 AM

This is absolutely stunning well deserved win really. I especially love “ filagree wings in flight” “ fitting in a bright dance” ah so very creative how you’ve done this pleiades. So glad i saw this. Congratulations. A new fave for me

Laura Leiser
Date: 9/14/2023 6:57:00 PM

You are too kind, Ink Impress! I thank you for the high praise and fave! :)