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Firefly

Glossy gleaming glow Light bearer of moonless night Fine flimsy fancy Gold glitter midst fond blossoms Says--- let your light shine wholesome 11 March 2022 Firefly Tanka Poetry Contest Sponsored by: JCB Brul

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/17/2022 10:07:00 PM

lovely imagery! Congrats for your win.

Charmane Bellen

Date: 3/17/2022 4:02:00 PM

Beautiful! I could imagine them. Congratulations! lovelots ~Charmane

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/17/2022 9:12:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Your "Firefly" is a lovely Tanka write. Have a blessed day writing away.......................

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 3/17/2022 8:12:00 AM

Very pretty, congrats-

Howard Kerr

Date: 3/17/2022 5:36:00 AM

Hello Christural Alex, First and foremost congratulations on your winning placement. Your Tanka has inspiring moments of alliteration and an overall lyrical arch. Thanks for your comment on my work which I value. Howard

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/16/2022 10:16:00 AM

Congratulations on your first-place contest win, Alex. You deserve it with this splendid and well-crafted Tanka.

Christuraj Alex
Date: 3/17/2022 4:34:00 AM

Thank you very much.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 3/16/2022 10:12:00 AM

Love your alliteration and imagery Chris AND the reference to This Little Light of mine. So clever! So charming! Congratulations on your win. Blessings of light to you!

Christuraj Alex
Date: 3/17/2022 4:34:00 AM

Thank you very much.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/11/2022 9:12:00 AM

Lovely Poem. So well penned. Many different species yet I have never seen them. My husband has in his early years when hiking with friends in Mozambique. Best wishes Alex blessings Jennifer.

Christuraj Alex
Date: 3/16/2022 9:16:00 AM

Thank you vey much.

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 3/11/2022 7:57:00 AM

Loved your marvellous Tanka, Christuraj! Great alliteration too! Love ~ Mala

Christuraj Alex
Date: 3/11/2022 8:52:00 AM

Thank you very much.