Fireflies

Flying in twilight like
fairies bearing tiny
flashlights which constantly
flicker on and off, this
family of bugs are
factually beetles -
fascinating to me!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Flood Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 3:10 PM
A Pleiades in a single sentence. Like it. Congrats on your win, Andrea
Fowler Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 11:42 AM
Back with huge congratulations Andrea! :)
Andresen Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 10:37 AM
- They are fascinating to me too, Andrea :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs
Miller Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 8:26 AM
Lovely Pleiades; congratulations
May Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 6:50 AM
Wonderful write Andrea, Congrats on your win
Daniel Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 1:35 AM
Wonderful:)
Fowler Avatar
September 13, 2023 at 1:31 PM
Sweet 'fs' Andrea. They are fascinating little creatures! BOL! :)
Bauer Avatar
September 13, 2023 at 9:48 AM
i didn't know that they are beetles, andrea, so thank you for that fact. i love the way you've described them...
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September 13, 2023 at 7:35 AM
"Flying in twilght like, fairies bearing tiny flashlights" This is absolutely a magical take for the contest, dear poetess.. How adorable is the description here and fireflies are so fascinating to me as well.. The subtle glow and radiance of this Pleiades has definitely enchanted my heart, so beautifully done :)
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