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Firecrackers and Miracles

Chinese alchemy, A good reason to invent, The 4th of July.

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Kalle Haas

Date: 8/27/2011 5:03:00 PM

Lovely Haiku poem. I love the theme; fireworks!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/23/2011 9:42:00 PM

Congrats Will on your featured poem this week on PS.. wonderful one to share with us all with luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/23/2011 3:56:00 PM

Congratulations William on your poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol

Scarlett Sepulvado Anderson

Date: 7/13/2010 5:43:00 AM

Yes! As a former chemist the fireworks that explode are fun to make. Hard to get the chemicals these days though. lol Have a great day! Scarlett

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/4/2010 2:03:00 AM

well yeah a good reason to invent for all the children to go and have thier fun exploding stuff lol,, enjoyed...P.D.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/3/2010 8:27:00 PM

Great one Will but u need some dots like ..... after your lst word in second line for emphasis.. see the instructions for Debbie's contest... invent is the action verb so put the ...... after that .. it has happened to me so I know.. good luck my friend.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii...

Date: 7/3/2010 4:46:00 PM

Interesting perspective for the reader to ponder about. Thank you for sharing it with us. Keep on writing. Karen

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/3/2010 4:46:00 PM

Great write in this one..Very creative my friend..Sara