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Fire Within Speaks

Fire talks to the dark: Tells it of light— While touching up covered walls; Scattering the core lies, Let it all burn. In its pitch, open fingers grasp For passion. Heated jabs ignite A flame— leaving behind the pain. Embers swell to be only used— (Warming you) Then fade— out of the maker's Hoarse end.

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/13/2023 4:33:00 PM

Like: In its pitch, open fingers grasp For passion.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 6/13/2023 1:15:00 PM

Paige, this is quite exceptionally done. You are quite a poet Pangie xx

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/13/2023 12:30:00 PM

This exquisite poem offers a unique perspective on the complexities of human emotions, evoking a deep admiration within me. It has certainly captured my heart and soul, Paige.

Anonomus Scorpio

Date: 6/6/2023 5:25:00 PM

"Let ut all burn. In its pitch open fingers grasp" what a wonderful way to look at feelings in my opinion. I like this one a great deal. With every respect A.S.

Bill Baker

Date: 6/4/2023 5:38:00 PM

Thought-provoking poetry, Paige. I liked it. Bill