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Fire of Verde

Verde chases for his meal A Trodden over clovers Robin An oriole flickers up Red Beating down the grass Breast A cardinal darts away Twitches A streak of lightening flashes Until The last bluebird bursts Death

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Charlie Smith

Date: 6/8/2016 10:41:00 AM

Wonderful form Frankii, congratulations and welcome...

Soleia FireBorn
Date: 6/30/2016 2:32:00 PM

thank you this is one of my favorite ones I wrote...I had it published by poetry.com....

Soleia FireBorn

Date: 6/2/2016 11:46:00 AM

I have never written structured poetry other than in a creative writing class, and even then I didn't learn much of structure other than haiku's. I am going to try some structure to see if it adds to my writing. Thank you for the welcome.

Skat A

Date: 6/1/2016 11:04:00 PM

Frankii, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**

Soleia FireBorn
Date: 6/30/2016 2:34:00 PM

thx...I would like to be able to tell you when I like your writing too...

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/1/2016 10:51:00 PM

Frankii,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Soleia FireBorn
Date: 6/30/2016 2:35:00 PM

thx...I looooove constructive criticism!!!! Improving is a goal of mine and working on form...

Moon Flower

Date: 6/1/2016 9:03:00 PM

That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Frankii. :)

Soleia FireBorn
Date: 6/30/2016 2:34:00 PM

thank you dear... do you happen to write some esoteric lines btw??