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Fire Mountain

Discharging earth’s blood, Waterfalls of molten rock: Black clouds fill the sky.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Tim Ryerson
Date: 9/18/2009 7:08:00 PM
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VOLCANIC Haiku Raul...What else to say? The earth bleeds...All blessings my friend Tim
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John Weber
Date: 9/16/2009 11:51:00 AM
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The earth's blood line is excellent and original, Raul! The conveyance of the planet as a living being really sounds true to me on this one. Warm regards, John.
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Abe Lopez
Date: 9/15/2009 10:43:00 AM
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capturing the image with a 12 megapixal pen! well done my friend
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Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 9/15/2009 9:05:00 AM
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You are the Haiku man Raul nuff said. Love, Carol
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Doris Culverhouse
Date: 9/15/2009 7:33:00 AM
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volcanic?
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Robin L. Gass
Date: 9/15/2009 5:16:00 AM
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This is another outstanding example of your talents, Raul. The images are great and the form, as always, perfect! I love the title. Love, Robin
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 9/14/2009 11:05:00 PM
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Black clouds fill the sky........love this verse..excellent work--Charma
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Karla Null
Date: 9/14/2009 5:35:00 PM
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Loving it..Fire Mountain is a perfect name for a volcano...Karla
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Deirdre Omaidin
Date: 9/14/2009 2:34:00 PM
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Fantastically descriptive haiku here, makes the terrfying prospects so life like. It's great. Regards: Déirdre
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James Fraser
Date: 9/14/2009 2:11:00 PM
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Big WoW Raul, excellent Haiku once again>>James
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Nadia Shahwan
Date: 9/14/2009 1:51:00 PM
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The best haiku so far to be read. May I dare to say that it complements my poem "Spring links"? Just flow you poems. All the bet.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/14/2009 1:39:00 PM
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Very descriptive Haiku. I can see the smoke and lava flow. Sara
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