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Fire Mountain

Discharging earth’s blood,
Waterfalls of molten rock:
Black clouds fill the sky.

Copyright © Raul Moreno | Year Posted 2009

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September 18, 2009 at 7:08 PM

VOLCANIC Haiku Raul...What else to say? The earth bleeds...All blessings my friend Tim

September 16, 2009 at 11:51 AM

The earth's blood line is excellent and original, Raul! The conveyance of the planet as a living being really sounds true to me on this one. Warm regards, John.

September 15, 2009 at 10:43 AM

capturing the image with a 12 megapixal pen! well done my friend

Carol Sunshine Brown

September 15, 2009 at 9:05 AM

You are the Haiku man Raul nuff said. Love, Carol

Doris Culverhouse

September 15, 2009 at 7:33 AM

volcanic?

September 15, 2009 at 5:16 AM

This is another outstanding example of your talents, Raul. The images are great and the form, as always, perfect! I love the title. Love, Robin

Charmaine Chircop

September 14, 2009 at 11:05 PM

Black clouds fill the sky........love this verse..excellent work--Charma

September 14, 2009 at 5:35 PM

Loving it..Fire Mountain is a perfect name for a volcano...Karla

Deirdre Omaidin

September 14, 2009 at 2:34 PM

Fantastically descriptive haiku here, makes the terrfying prospects so life like. It's great. Regards: Déirdre

September 14, 2009 at 2:11 PM

Big WoW Raul, excellent Haiku once again>>James

September 14, 2009 at 1:51 PM

The best haiku so far to be read. May I dare to say that it complements my poem "Spring links"? Just flow you poems. All the bet.

September 14, 2009 at 1:39 PM

Very descriptive Haiku. I can see the smoke and lava flow. Sara

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