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Fire Mountain

Discharging earth’s blood, Waterfalls of molten rock: Black clouds fill the sky.

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Tim Ryerson

Date: 9/18/2009 7:08:00 PM

VOLCANIC Haiku Raul...What else to say? The earth bleeds...All blessings my friend Tim

John Weber

Date: 9/16/2009 11:51:00 AM

The earth's blood line is excellent and original, Raul! The conveyance of the planet as a living being really sounds true to me on this one. Warm regards, John.

Abe Lopez

Date: 9/15/2009 10:43:00 AM

capturing the image with a 12 megapixal pen! well done my friend

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/15/2009 9:05:00 AM

You are the Haiku man Raul nuff said. Love, Carol

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/15/2009 7:33:00 AM

volcanic?

Robin L. Gass

Date: 9/15/2009 5:16:00 AM

This is another outstanding example of your talents, Raul. The images are great and the form, as always, perfect! I love the title. Love, Robin

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/14/2009 11:05:00 PM

Black clouds fill the sky........love this verse..excellent work--Charma

Karla Null

Date: 9/14/2009 5:35:00 PM

Loving it..Fire Mountain is a perfect name for a volcano...Karla

Deirdre Omaidin

Date: 9/14/2009 2:34:00 PM

Fantastically descriptive haiku here, makes the terrfying prospects so life like. It's great. Regards: Déirdre

James Fraser

Date: 9/14/2009 2:11:00 PM

Big WoW Raul, excellent Haiku once again>>James

Nadia Shahwan

Date: 9/14/2009 1:51:00 PM

The best haiku so far to be read. May I dare to say that it complements my poem "Spring links"? Just flow you poems. All the bet.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/14/2009 1:39:00 PM

Very descriptive Haiku. I can see the smoke and lava flow. Sara