Fire In the Sky

Darkness carves night from day's glare with a half moon
smile under star-studded eyes. Faces glow as silver spoon
ladles the rapture of Venus. Fly Golden flames! Shower
the horizon before stars fall, languishing too soon.

Behold, the glory! Applaud the gallant trail of pewter
in wide-eyed dreams. Dancing in shadows, the suitor
from silver screen projects shooting stars. Piercing
hearts of lovers, metal shines, a welcomed intruder.

Brand each beating heart with the reigning night! Fuse
with the goddess of love before stars fade from sight. Cruise
on blazing chariot through evanescence of passion's mist,
and memories of spirit sky shall set fire to our muse.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 7/26/2013 11:26:00 PM
still thinking of you just like Cyndi is. Please come back to us!!!
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Date: 7/18/2013 8:24:00 PM
Thought of you today. Miss your sunny smile, brilliant poetry, brave heart. Hope you are well. Hope you are happy. Also hope you will stop by one day, even if just to say Hi, I'm okay... hugs, Cyndi
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Date: 5/4/2013 6:35:00 AM
PS--I'll search though my old emails soon, I "think" you're on my newer addy... hoping, hoping... and I'll try to touch base with you that way.
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Date: 5/4/2013 6:33:00 AM
Hoping you are well... I can not remember your due date! I do hope you stop by, let us know the "big news!" love sent! :D
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Date: 4/4/2013 11:08:00 AM
I am thinking about you... realizing you're in your third trimester, the final stretch... if you do stop by, please soupie me, K? Another mom is hurting on soup, a place we've BEEN, share your news with me and I'll pass on the word to some chums, out of sensitivity to a grieving family, k? Think about you, miss your positive energy, but you must be so busy, exhausted... love sent. Hope all is well. xox Cyndi
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Date: 3/29/2013 4:29:00 PM
rhonda. ARe you ok? I just ran across an old comment you made at someone's poem from a while back and realized I had not heard from you in a while. Please let me know what is going on! I miss you.
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Date: 3/3/2013 9:02:00 PM
Oh how wonderful Rhonda. You are such a gifted poet!!! Where are you. We miss you. You're in my prayers. Love you bunches. Deb
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Date: 12/27/2012 3:37:00 PM
Beautiful, Rhonda. - The year 2012 is almost over. - I thank you for all the nice poem you have shared with me, and that you have taken the time to read and comments my poems. - Always pleasant, I appreciate your visit. - I have enjoyed a lot here at P-Soup and made many good friends. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/4/2012 2:15:00 PM
this*
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Date: 11/4/2012 2:14:00 PM
love those awesome write, Rhonda
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Date: 10/12/2012 9:53:00 AM
Where are You Rhonda........
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Date: 10/6/2012 3:40:00 PM
A beaut! Kudos for your win Rhonda... big big hugs, Jack
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Date: 10/5/2012 4:43:00 PM
love this poem sandy
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Date: 10/5/2012 6:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Craig's contest Rhonda. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/4/2012 10:11:00 PM
Thinking of you...
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Date: 10/4/2012 2:22:00 AM
Well Rhonda...you've done it again!...I would have placed this a lot higher (No offense, Craig!)...I'm a huge fan of yours!...can I have an autograph?...It's for my daughter...no wait! I mean my nephew!...my uncle?... Ooops, don't have no uncles any more!..Let's see...how 'bout my...Congratulations my friend! - Tim
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Date: 10/3/2012 7:41:00 AM
what a great way how you did yours, Rhonda. It was an inspiring one!!! Congrats on your win. Great imagery too.
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Date: 10/3/2012 6:16:00 AM
Congratulations Rhonda, knew you would be in the winners circle xx
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Date: 10/2/2012 1:12:00 PM
RHODA :-) A wonderful congratulations in Craig's "Night-Dark-Black-Happy-Sad" contest. Nice reading and supporting all his winners. have a nice and wonderful day, *PD
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Date: 10/2/2012 9:49:00 AM
a fine way to awaken inspiration, rhonda... congrats on your special win!..:) huggs
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Date: 10/2/2012 7:37:00 AM
Congrats on another fine write...I wish someone or something would set fire to my muse..love that line. BG
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Date: 10/2/2012 6:30:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Rhinda!
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Date: 10/1/2012 10:59:00 PM
Congratulations on your win friend Rhonda…cheers and hugs!! (^_^)
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Date: 10/1/2012 9:06:00 PM
You have an inspiration quality about your writing, that is wonderful. I love the imagery. Well done. Congratulations on your win. Lee
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Date: 10/1/2012 8:51:00 PM
Great poem... Congratulations on your win!! Terry
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