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The sun rose red like fireballs being played Soon as it rose clouds enveloped to stay Sand rippled the clouds became bleak and gray Streaks of cobalt, gray and snow white today But the doves did coo saying I love you Roosters, crows, chirp rip chirp rip too At one time magenta undercoated the clouds Giving hope where non was allowed The rippled effect like a clam's fine shell Touched my heart with feelings so it swelled Such a day to be blessed with life Why would anyone want to destroy with a knife? All at once stillness decended, peace, love As one vulture the sky ascended Tranquility upon porch surrounded I could feel its presence my heart astounded One lone vulture returned in flight Looking for food or just for fun_delight The dove coos once again nesting instinct Has settled upon him Peace, love, joy am filled Thank you God for my time being still___

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/13/2012 2:23:00 PM
Enjoyed reading it again, my friend - very clever piece
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Date: 2/10/2012 7:38:00 PM
great poem and rhyme i see, well done sweet lady, thee...
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Date: 2/10/2012 12:01:00 PM
Loved the Dove's coo meant as peace and love where joy is indeed. Loved much, always bl
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Date: 2/10/2012 9:42:00 AM
Such a beautiful poem. You are so gifted! Bless You Avis
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Date: 2/10/2012 12:58:00 AM
Oh..! and brightened..)
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Date: 2/10/2012 12:57:00 AM
Enjoyed this outstanding write Sara,, you have broaden'd my horizon-less grey day,,
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Date: 2/9/2012 5:01:00 PM
Thank you once again, Sara, for your comment. I loved your poem on the porch. You certainly are a lover of nature and you obviously "take time to smell the roses". God bless you, Maureen
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Date: 2/9/2012 3:05:00 PM
I love hearing about your time on that porch of yours, Sara. Lovely piece
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