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For Your Choice h Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

A poet asked a question, nicely, better to die in fire - or in icely? But what about the sun or moonly? What if they should die too soonly? The sun and moon, up there spinning, engaged, they are, celestial twinning, their sizes in the sky, the saming, ice and fire twins, freezing, flaming.

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Date: 5/16/2025 1:00:00 PM
What a great poem! Ingenious!
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David Crandall
Date: 5/16/2025 6:21:00 PM
Thanks Kim!

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