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Fire and Ice

The fire in your eyes means war Can’t stop it because I feel your anger I am just here sitting at the corner Hoping the heat I created will disappear When I approached you after an hour The coldness in your heart begins to pour It’s like a brick of ice in the arctic You stared at me like a blank space Where do I stand if you put me to blame? Have mercy on me and please change So that we can live a life with peace No fighting, no coldness but a pure happiness I I I I I I December 5, 20122 Maria Paz Samelo For Carol's Fire and Ice Free Poetry Contest 4th Place winner

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S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 12/19/2012 6:26:00 AM

Congratulations, Maria, on the win with this fine write!! Jag

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/19/2012 5:03:00 AM

Creative thinking for your entry in the contest..Congrats on your great win..Sara

Len Gasun

Date: 12/19/2012 4:55:00 AM

Wow! this is another win my dear friend! I'm so happy for you! Big congratulations! love/hugs, LG

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/18/2012 8:43:00 PM

Maria, 2 perceived opposite meanings when it comes to "FIRE And ICE" :-) Congratulations with your winning poem In , Carol's contest... goodnight~ PD

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/18/2012 5:04:00 PM

congrats for the win, Maria. Good to see it got on the list!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/18/2012 1:54:00 PM

Thank you for supporting my contest and congratulations on your placement Maria. Love, Carol

Richard Palmer

Date: 12/8/2012 10:33:00 PM

nice write Maria,best of luck,love the icicle shape lol

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 12/8/2012 10:39:00 PM

thanks friend Richard :)

Juli- Michelle

Date: 12/8/2012 10:25:00 PM

love it! good luck in the contest! -JuliMichelle

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 12/8/2012 10:39:00 PM

thanks friend Juli :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/8/2012 1:20:00 PM

I like your poem, good luck in the contest. Your profile picture is very cool!

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 12/8/2012 10:38:00 PM

thanks again friend Richard :) Have a nice day!! its 12:37 pm here..goodnight :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/8/2012 10:23:00 PM

you are very Beautiful and an excellent poet as well. Have a good night.

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 12/8/2012 10:12:00 PM

thank you so much friend Richard..my picture was taken 4 years ago :) Good day!!

Len Gasun

Date: 12/6/2012 6:51:00 AM

Hi, my dear friend! This is a very fantastic poem you've written! Two thumbs up again! I'm sorry I came late. I came here yesterday but I didn't stay long because I was not yet feeling well. Now, I am getting better but still I need to rest because of my cough. Huh! It's really humid and you know how allergic I am. Besides, flu again is an outbreak in school. Well, this is a well-written poem. Winner for sure. Good luck for a big win. Thank you for your nice comments. love always, LG

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 12/6/2012 7:42:00 AM

Get well soon dear Norie, thanks for your nice comments..I just stay at home and in the evening I went to the mall and eat alone then bought a 70% sale on food, vegetables, etc.. see you tomorrow :)