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Fire

Mesmerizing trance Seductive dance Bouncing flames Endlessly change Feel fire’s soul Rising from the coal Warm and inviting Seductively enticing I’m drawn deep inside Where the secrets hide Where oxygen thrives Keeping flames alive I want the heat the flickering beat as flames rise up and then retreat Starve the fire of oxygen and wood and it’s soul soon dies As a human life would Comforting to know that it burns for me I need the certainty Even when I can’t see Near enough to feel the heat Wanting consumption to feel complete Against my will Denying the thrill I hesitantly turn Fearing the burn Nurturing the fire Takes more than desire to watch the flames as they dance higher It’s the core inside where life resides flames now retreating Fire’s heart slows beating Embers glowing not ever knowing Will life reignite or extinguish tonight Knowing that soon With naught to consume Fire’s beauty will just Becomes ashes and dust Blackened and dark No hint of a spark Feeling the cold Fire’s secrets untold

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 4/20/2018 12:14:00 AM
superb! regards, ~ashok
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Date: 1/10/2018 6:12:00 PM
oh it ended on a sad note. I really like this, Judith/ Had to go way down your list to find one to read!!
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Date: 12/22/2017 7:30:00 AM
That line..."with naught to consume" really spoke to me about the need to not just feel the fire, but also to continuously feed it.
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Judith S
Date: 12/22/2017 10:53:00 PM
Thank you for your comments Starling! Really appreciate your visit!!! Best, Judy
Date: 11/2/2017 3:34:00 PM
This can have different meaning.. one of a passionate embrace... another about how lifes fire can burn out or extinguish...
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Judith S
Date: 11/2/2017 5:11:00 PM
Yes ... this is about passion and wanting to go into it ... but afraid to take it. Because it has burned me in the past.
Date: 10/28/2017 8:53:00 AM
You brought the heat with this one.;0)
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Judith S
Date: 10/29/2017 10:45:00 AM
Hehe ... thanks Richard!
Date: 10/24/2017 4:58:00 PM
Great flow and rhyme Judith! You have a magic touch with pen and paper. Another great piece.
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Judith S
Date: 10/24/2017 5:27:00 PM
James ... thank you so much for your encouragement!
Date: 9/20/2017 10:22:00 AM
your poem is genuinely amazing. what are you doing on poetry soup? You should be published! I feel like an amateur after reading you
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