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FIRE Fires burn waste and fire burns home Igniting the ugly and the lovely the same Roaring flames take lives and leave alone Extinguishing for earth’s sake though lingers pain Formerly were lives that mattered And cats and dogs who once were brothers And a place that stood not at all battered Those children and grannies and significant others But, the death of memories will vaguely play The visions were given to strengthen souls And will prevail on that final day When man and beast enter heaven or Scheol What matters is that all senses do see Living through fires, lessons well taught to thee.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 6/23/2016 5:30:00 PM
Terrific sonnet! Your play of words is really fantastic! Especially liked the last stanza. Well done contest winner!
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Bonnie Jennings
Date: 6/25/2016 6:58:00 PM
Thank you so very much for your poetic encouragement. It truly means so much...
Date: 5/11/2016 9:52:00 PM
I can see the flames and feel the intense heat of this sonnet! Congratulations on this winner of yours! :-)
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Bonnie Jennings
Date: 5/11/2016 10:19:00 PM
Thank you Walter... Your comment is well appreciated...
Date: 5/4/2016 5:03:00 PM
Love your poem, Bonnie! The first stanza rises and falls with contrasts. I can see the personal touch!
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Date: 5/4/2016 10:22:00 AM
Simply have to fav this one as it a great sonnet! Clarity of message, flow, rhyme and heart all excellent in this superb piece. A7
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Bonnie Jennings
Date: 5/4/2016 11:39:00 AM
Thank you, Robert... This message is music to me... Thanks a million!
Date: 5/4/2016 4:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in my Fire contest with this lesson well learned Fire poem of yours Bonnie! Thank you for entering
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Bonnie Jennings
Date: 5/4/2016 5:14:00 AM
Thank you for your message. I didn't know that I placed! Wow, thanks Brian!

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