Fire

FIRE

Fires burn waste and fire burns home
Igniting the ugly and the lovely the same
Roaring flames take lives and leave alone
Extinguishing for earth’s sake though lingers pain

Formerly were lives that mattered
And cats and dogs who once were brothers
And a place that stood not at all battered
Those children and grannies and significant others

But, the death of memories will vaguely play
The visions were given to strengthen souls
And will prevail on that final day
When man and beast enter heaven or Scheol    

What matters is that all senses do see
Living through fires, lessons well taught to thee.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Marschall Avatar
June 23, 2016 at 5:30 PM
Terrific sonnet! Your play of words is really fantastic! Especially liked the last stanza. Well done contest winner!
Jennings Avatar
June 25, 2016 at 6:58 PM
Thank you so very much for your poetic encouragement. It truly means so much...
Ashe Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 9:52 PM
I can see the flames and feel the intense heat of this sonnet! Congratulations on this winner of yours! :-)
Jennings Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 10:19 PM
Thank you Walter... Your comment is well appreciated...
Rodrigues Avatar
May 4, 2016 at 5:03 PM
Love your poem, Bonnie! The first stanza rises and falls with contrasts. I can see the personal touch!
Lindley Avatar
May 4, 2016 at 10:22 AM
Simply have to fav this one as it a great sonnet! Clarity of message, flow, rhyme and heart all excellent in this superb piece. A7
Jennings Avatar
May 4, 2016 at 11:39 AM
Thank you, Robert... This message is music to me... Thanks a million!
Davey Avatar
May 4, 2016 at 4:05 AM
Congratulations on your placement in my Fire contest with this lesson well learned Fire poem of yours Bonnie! Thank you for entering
Jennings Avatar
May 4, 2016 at 5:14 AM
Thank you for your message. I didn't know that I placed! Wow, thanks Brian!
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