Fire

Cinders spark and crack,
and flames wriggle like snakes,
fleeing a pit of roast-en ash,
through wooden crates and molten wheel,
gasoline explodes and hells release,
of red hot smut, engulfs with blackest soot,
tectonic shift within the flame, 
brings blazing, tower crashing down,
impacting like King Kong,
as tragic as the greatest wrong,
scattered silhouettes of folk,
scramble to and fro and dance and try,
to intervene and drown the primal scream.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Curl Avatar
February 24, 2010 at 9:16 PM
Wow! This is like looking into a fire made of words, brilliant
Fringe Avatar
February 14, 2010 at 10:58 PM
David, nice wording and description. Check soupmail. David
Chircop Avatar
February 14, 2010 at 4:12 PM
This blazing Flame is powerful...It screams "Fire.."Very good poem indeed..Charma
Guzzi Avatar
February 13, 2010 at 1:57 PM
Un believable reality! frightenly real! excellent! Light & Love
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February 13, 2010 at 1:28 PM
I am curious does still exist in any other culture the ritual like dancing round the gigantic bonfire on Helloween ? There is something universal. Most of children had in the past kind of primal experience with fire.
Kendrick Avatar
February 12, 2010 at 12:15 PM
Very desciptive of some fires that I have witnessed in the fire place of years ago. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara
Palli Avatar
February 12, 2010 at 12:10 PM
so realistic
Chamma Avatar
February 12, 2010 at 11:46 AM
Potently descriptive. Great write... thank you for your comment =) Always, Farah
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February 12, 2010 at 7:54 AM
Wow, very descriptive writing, David. Love it!! Andrea
Kelly Avatar
February 12, 2010 at 5:25 AM
Had a car like that , once , David but it never made the NCT !!! .Great descriptive piece ....
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February 10, 2010 at 11:42 PM
Like the alliteration and strong imagery of the last three lines David.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.
Sweetheart Avatar
February 10, 2010 at 7:20 PM
Interesting write David .. reference to King Kong indicates a powerful theme.. and those flames and cinders ..very visual.. I just posted February Flames.. Soup must be on fire tonight... luv.. Linda-Marie..
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