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Fire

Cinders spark and crack, and flames wriggle like snakes, fleeing a pit of roast-en ash, through wooden crates and molten wheel, gasoline explodes and hells release, of red hot smut, engulfs with blackest soot, tectonic shift within the flame, brings blazing, tower crashing down, impacting like King Kong, as tragic as the greatest wrong, scattered silhouettes of folk, scramble to and fro and dance and try, to intervene and drown the primal scream.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/24/2010 9:16:00 PM
Wow! This is like looking into a fire made of words, brilliant
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Date: 2/14/2010 10:58:00 PM
David, nice wording and description. Check soupmail. David
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Date: 2/14/2010 4:12:00 PM
This blazing Flame is powerful...It screams "Fire.."Very good poem indeed..Charma
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Date: 2/13/2010 1:57:00 PM
Un believable reality! frightenly real! excellent! Light & Love
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Date: 2/13/2010 1:28:00 PM
I am curious does still exist in any other culture the ritual like dancing round the gigantic bonfire on Helloween ? There is something universal. Most of children had in the past kind of primal experience with fire.
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Date: 2/12/2010 12:15:00 PM
Very desciptive of some fires that I have witnessed in the fire place of years ago. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara
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Date: 2/12/2010 12:10:00 PM
so realistic
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Date: 2/12/2010 11:46:00 AM
Potently descriptive. Great write... thank you for your comment =) Always, Farah
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Date: 2/12/2010 7:54:00 AM
Wow, very descriptive writing, David. Love it!! Andrea
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Date: 2/12/2010 5:25:00 AM
Had a car like that , once , David but it never made the NCT !!! .Great descriptive piece ....
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Date: 2/10/2010 11:42:00 PM
Like the alliteration and strong imagery of the last three lines David.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.
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Date: 2/10/2010 7:20:00 PM
Interesting write David .. reference to King Kong indicates a powerful theme.. and those flames and cinders ..very visual.. I just posted February Flames.. Soup must be on fire tonight... luv.. Linda-Marie..
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