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Finn Mcgee and Me Part3

MacJock looked uptight When we said "That's not right, We're not paying one pence you see" Den Finn swung and missed With his powerful fist And it landed on the jaw of McGee MacJock grabbed a bottle Intending to throttle The closest poor sod in his way And this caused a ruckus McGee was so luckless It certainly wasn't his day But when Macjock hit McGee He went flying you see And busted MacJock's new table Then McGee tossed a chair Clear through the air Hoping MacJock to disable The others ensued In this Hullaballoo Until, all I could see was the brawl There were glasses and mugs Bottles and jugs Smashing against every wall The place was a mess I sure can attest When the fightin' came to its end Not an eye was still blinking So I started thinking Dat its tyme to go 'ome un mend Just one more part will end it

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Date: 4/18/2014 2:42:00 AM
This is so entertaining. I will go and read the other parts two. Love your word play.
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 4/18/2014 6:24:00 AM
Thank You Suzanne, I do like telling stories, it's funny how things change, when I was younger, they used to call them lies.......just kidding
Date: 4/17/2014 8:26:00 AM
oh nice, I must go back bow and read part 1 and 2 LOL Love it
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 4/17/2014 2:58:00 PM
Thanks Donald, it's comments like this that encourage me to finnish the story

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