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Finding What Was Lost

“It’s in there!” The frizzy haired woman insisted with mirth in her eye. “But, how?” I asked beseechingly. She gave a mischievous laugh from impish lips in reply And then skipped merrily on her way. The most precious thing I ever lost Contained in a small puzzle box? Ridiculous! I paused. No, I knew what the lady said to be true. I could hear the enchanted object Whispering to me In an unfamiliar language That my heart somehow understood. I was missing a precious commodity. Something very special. My memory could only see vague outlines. However, I was confident A magnificent treasure Lied within the small chest. Now focused, The mystery of unlocking the chest came naturally. With greedy eagerness I quickly opened that which held me back From my forgotten prize. And . . . The chamber was empty Save a simple unframed mirror Taped to the inside of the lid. I remembered the woman with a playful smile And thought, “Is this a woeful attempt at a joke?!” I started to seethe And my face began to contort Then I saw my reflection. Memories of loss Due to anger, regret, and missed opportunities Cascaded into my mind. Were these my most precious valuables? Did I now consider these thoughts so I could make changes? Or did I recall them to realize that they made me who I am today? Both or neither! It didn’t matter. It was simply the past On which I didn’t dwell. Again enraged, I shook myself from my stupor, tore the mirror from its place, and threw it shattering to the ground. “So, it was a trick.” I grumbled. And was just about to curse when a glint from box caught the corner of my eye. Upon closer examination, Behind where the looking glass once stood, Was a simple etching that pierced me with a penitent knife. “I heart Jenny” Jenny. Jennifer. My sister who passed away When I was the simple age of five. A beautiful brown haired brown eyed teenager With a kind smile and the most incredible soul. Cancer. Had it really been over four decades? Too few memories and too little recollection over the years. Now, I recalled. Feelings as much as details. Love and peace. I made a commitment to myself. To never lose sight of that which was most important again.

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Date: 4/13/2024 1:35:00 PM
Your poems are like wonderful short stories! Excellent messages too!
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Robert Sidwell
Date: 4/14/2024 12:32:00 PM
Very kind! Thank you Diane!!
Date: 2/20/2024 2:07:00 PM
Welcome to PS Robert
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Robert Sidwell
Date: 2/21/2024 9:33:00 AM
Thanks for the welcome Tom!
Date: 2/19/2024 6:46:00 PM
Dear Robert, the emotional tone of your poem upon my imagination was like the moon's gravitational pull upon the tides, your vivid verse pulled me in with potent and poignant affect. Beautiful and moving soul searching so eloquently and intimately expressed. A stunning first poem! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Robert Sidwell
Date: 2/20/2024 9:44:00 AM
Thank you! I really appreciate you and your kind and touching comments.
Date: 2/16/2024 11:59:00 AM
An unusual poem that had me wondering, soon I saw the wonder in your heartfelt poem Robert. I am eager to read more. I loved this one, You captured real sentiment. So well done.
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Robert Sidwell
Date: 2/17/2024 9:01:00 AM
Thank you! I genuinely appreciate your generous comments.
Date: 1/29/2024 11:29:00 AM
So pleased you found what you lost Robert. Welcome to PoetrySoup. Beryl
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Robert Sidwell
Date: 1/29/2024 2:24:00 PM
Thank you, Beryl. I appreciate your welcome!
Date: 1/26/2024 1:44:00 PM
An excellent first post, welcome to poetry soup..
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Robert Sidwell
Date: 1/27/2024 9:46:00 AM
Thank you for the welcome! I’ve got to say, I’m blown away by the incredible amount of talent on this site.
Date: 1/26/2024 2:09:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Robert Sidwell
Date: 1/26/2024 9:14:00 AM
Thank you for the warm welcome :)

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