Finding the Words

Again, I sit between the trees, 
Pen and paper on my knees. 
I look for something new not old. 
I search for story never told.  

Between the branches squirrels leap. 
While near my feet the critters creep. 
I wait to hear the special sound, 
Of story falling to the ground.  

Leaves they move, dance and rest.  
Sun moves too, towards the west.  
Moons will rise and birds will flock. 
Days will pass and months will clock.  
 
Away the breeze carries the birds. 
At the air I grasp for words. 
I touch the old and never the new.  
Still I keep on - with thoughts of you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Krutsinger Avatar
October 24, 2021 at 12:47 AM
Jerry, your end rhymes are succinct and wonderfully done. Congrats on the win. I really liked this part "Leaves they move, dance and rest. Sun moves too, towards the west. Moons will rise and birds will flock. Days will pass and months will clock."Bravo!
Hackett Avatar
October 28, 2021 at 1:49 AM
Karen, thanks for the kind words.
Allison Avatar
October 21, 2021 at 5:00 PM
beautifully expressed Jerry, I especially can relate to the opening stanza, many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Hackett Avatar
October 22, 2021 at 12:54 AM
Thank you
Alex Avatar
October 20, 2021 at 11:24 PM
"I search for story never told""I touch the old and never the new. Still I keep on - with thoughts of you" - Beautiful! Congratulations!
Hackett Avatar
October 22, 2021 at 12:54 AM
Thanks,
Kauffman Avatar
October 19, 2021 at 11:34 AM
Jerry, congratulations on your win in Milt's contest. I can see why this is one of your favorites. I really like the way you blend writing images into each stanza! Very creative word use!
Hackett Avatar
October 22, 2021 at 12:54 AM
Thank you
Radice Avatar
October 19, 2021 at 7:40 AM
Congratulations Jerry on your placement in Milt's contest. I liked it all but particularly liked your third verse. Cheers - Gary
Hackett Avatar
October 22, 2021 at 12:53 AM
Thanks
Hankins Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 8:04 PM
Congratulations, Jerry, on your poem finding its place in the top ten poems submitted in my recent contest. I enjoyed your poem immensely.
Hackett Avatar
October 19, 2021 at 12:40 AM
Thanks for your nice words.
Ashley Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 8:03 PM
Oh, this is beautifully expressive and impressive, Jerry. Your wistful poem enchanted my heart's imagination. Congratulations for your excellent win in Milton's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Hackett Avatar
October 19, 2021 at 12:41 AM
Thanks for your nice words
Liguori Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 7:41 PM
Pleasant read, would love to see the written words you found!
Hackett Avatar
October 19, 2021 at 12:41 AM
thanks for your nice words
Ebbs Avatar
October 16, 2021 at 5:11 PM
Nicely written, remember to listen to leaves talking in the breeze...lots of chatter, sometimes a song. :)
Hackett Avatar
October 19, 2021 at 12:42 AM
Thanks
M  Avatar
October 16, 2021 at 3:27 AM
Oh jerry that is so nice…..beautifully written. Debx
Hackett Avatar
October 19, 2021 at 12:41 AM
Thanks again
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