Finding the Words

Again, I sit between the trees, 
Pen and paper on my knees. 
I look for something new not old. 
I search for story never told.  

Between the branches squirrels leap. 
While near my feet the critters creep. 
I wait to hear the special sound, 
Of story falling to the ground.  

Leaves they move, dance and rest.  
Sun moves too, towards the west.  
Moons will rise and birds will flock. 
Days will pass and months will clock.  
 
Away the breeze carries the birds. 
At the air I grasp for words. 
I touch the old and never the new.  
Still I keep on - with thoughts of you.

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Date: 10/24/2021 12:47:00 AM
Jerry, your end rhymes are succinct and wonderfully done. Congrats on the win. I really liked this part "Leaves they move, dance and rest. Sun moves too, towards the west. Moons will rise and birds will flock. Days will pass and months will clock."Bravo!
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Jerry Hackett
Date: 10/28/2021 1:49:00 AM
Karen, thanks for the kind words.
Date: 10/21/2021 5:00:00 PM
beautifully expressed Jerry, I especially can relate to the opening stanza, many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Jerry Hackett
Date: 10/22/2021 12:54:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 10/20/2021 11:24:00 PM
"I search for story never told""I touch the old and never the new. Still I keep on - with thoughts of you" - Beautiful! Congratulations!
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Jerry Hackett
Date: 10/22/2021 12:54:00 AM
Thanks,
Date: 10/19/2021 11:34:00 AM
Jerry, congratulations on your win in Milt's contest. I can see why this is one of your favorites. I really like the way you blend writing images into each stanza! Very creative word use!
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Jerry Hackett
Date: 10/22/2021 12:54:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 10/19/2021 7:40:00 AM
Congratulations Jerry on your placement in Milt's contest. I liked it all but particularly liked your third verse. Cheers - Gary
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Jerry Hackett
Date: 10/22/2021 12:53:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 10/18/2021 8:04:00 PM
Congratulations, Jerry, on your poem finding its place in the top ten poems submitted in my recent contest. I enjoyed your poem immensely.
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Jerry Hackett
Date: 10/19/2021 12:40:00 AM
Thanks for your nice words.
Date: 10/18/2021 8:03:00 PM
Oh, this is beautifully expressive and impressive, Jerry. Your wistful poem enchanted my heart's imagination. Congratulations for your excellent win in Milton's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Jerry Hackett
Date: 10/19/2021 12:41:00 AM
Thanks for your nice words
Date: 10/18/2021 7:41:00 PM
Pleasant read, would love to see the written words you found!
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Jerry Hackett
Date: 10/19/2021 12:41:00 AM
thanks for your nice words
Date: 10/16/2021 5:11:00 PM
Nicely written, remember to listen to leaves talking in the breeze...lots of chatter, sometimes a song. :)
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Jerry Hackett
Date: 10/19/2021 12:42:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 10/16/2021 3:27:00 AM
Oh jerry that is so nice…..beautifully written. Debx
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Jerry Hackett
Date: 10/19/2021 12:41:00 AM
Thanks again
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