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What does a Butterflies Symbolize?

"Life is like a book that never ends, chapters close, but not the book." Quote by _Marianne Williamson, Author, Spiritual Leader
Through most of my life I have had this never ending childlike foolish pride. Feeding on praise and boasting of my accomplishments with reckless vanity. I have crowned myself Queen in many instances and have lived in a castle that exists only in my mind. None of this is based on reality and is doomed, for it leads to being alone with narcissism. Saying to myself you are divine! I have kept people at a distance incase they figure out the truth. The truth that I am balanced on a lofty pedestal about to fall, and the facade that is me is about to shatter. So, I let go of Ego . . .
on a vision quest my spirit found butterflies . . . transforming rebirth
Here, now, I have been reborn through exploring the map of my life, and reading the chapters in a huge book that has been written of all my days. With the help of my spiritual animal, the butterfly, I can see the journeys, some rocky, some dark, some flat, some mountainous. I have crossed calm seas, and wandered parched deserts, traversed difficult terrains. Met Goblins in deep places. I see now that Ego was a protection from the truth, of my fear. But, here and now, I also see the courage, wisdom, strength awareness collected. I, no longer need the cloak of Ego . . .
forests saturate with birds songs and flowing streams . . . look back step forward "I can now be proud without being boastful, I can just be me." Quote by _ Constance
____________________ July 06, 2022 Poetry/Haibun/Finding The Magic In Me Copyright Protected, ID 07-1471-991-06 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Written for the Premiere contest, Ego Shorn, Here Now Reborn sponsor, Unseeking Seeker, Judged 07/14/2022 Third Place

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Date: 7/16/2022 9:17:00 AM
Congratulations! On your win. Beautifully written.
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Constance La France
Date: 7/16/2022 6:04:00 PM
Rasitha, thank you so much for the congratulations and compliment, blessings ~Constance
Date: 7/15/2022 4:19:00 PM
I love everything about this poem ~
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Date: 7/16/2022 6:05:00 PM
PM, thank you so much for the wonderful compliment, blessings ~Constance
Date: 7/15/2022 2:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write/story/picture/quote. Just like a butterfly, life makes many changes. Love It. Have a blessed day/weekend................
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Constance La France
Date: 7/16/2022 6:07:00 PM
Paula, thank you so much for the congratulations and the compliment, and comment, blessings ~Constance
Date: 7/14/2022 8:36:00 PM
You cast a hypnotic spell, Constance! An amazing, heartfelt write, God bless. Congratulations on your podium finish
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Constance La France
Date: 7/14/2022 8:48:00 PM
Seeker, thank you so much for the inspiration and the contest and for my great placement, and the comment, compliment and congratulations, appreciate, blessings ~Constance
Date: 7/9/2022 8:05:00 AM
Magnificent testimony. Love your vivid poetic prose, choice of words & phrases. Your love of the language=very apparent. While shedding ego, don’t lose the active inner Child…lose the ego centric iddea U are divine but GodGnot the knowing are a daughter of God.Read T.. Merton,Seeds of Contemplation. You Constance r Very blessed as is ur Path! The gifts God blessedU in the womb beautifully obvious in poetry,no doubt w/people too. hugs!
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Constance La France
Date: 7/10/2022 4:37:00 AM
Sally, thank you so much for the great comment and compliment on my poem, yes, it has been a long twisted journey to the here and now, but perhaps it was necessary to find who I really am, and I love who I have discovered is me, blessings ~Constance
Date: 7/7/2022 5:59:00 PM
Constance this is wonderful poetry though I’m sure you’ve been a little hard on the who you were, because just look at you now… Belle
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Constance La France
Date: 7/10/2022 4:40:00 AM
Belle, thank you so much for the compliment, well, it has been a journey no easy at times, the way I was once upon a time perhaps a protection, I think my inner child just wanted to be loved, but I truly think all that was leading me to the person I am today and the poet you know, it has been quite the journey, blessings ~Constance
Date: 7/6/2022 10:43:00 AM
This is the best kind of adventure story, Constance. What a thrill to discover all those things about yourself. Best of luck in the contest.
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Constance La France
Date: 7/6/2022 9:49:00 PM
Jim, thank you so much for the visit and comment. It has been a long journey to the here and now, with many ups and downs, I have lived many life's it seemed, been many people, but the person I am now, is the best because I am finally me, blessings ~Constance
Date: 7/6/2022 10:00:00 AM
Beautifully-written, Constance. I don't know how much of it is true of yourself, but I suspect most of it is not. I have observed you, in your poems, to be self-effacing and humble. Best wishes in the contest.
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Date: 7/6/2022 9:55:00 PM
Milt, thank you so much for the compliment on my poem. Once upon a time, I was not the girl you have come to know, I had lots of flaws, well, I probably still do. I have been on a long, long journey to the here and now and I love the me I have become. Thank you also for the encouragement, blessings ~Constance

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