Finding My True Love

How I wish I could be free,
To cuddle her with a kiss.
Will you come and dance with me,
Your nearness I sorely miss.

You're so far away from me,
I must roam around to find
If you have sailed the far sea,
And left me alone behind.

I roam about among fields
Would she be there in some shrub?
With fragrance that flower yields,
Or watching me from some pub?

Night began to darken skies,
'twas time for me to have a meal
There I saw her lovely eyes.
Quickly with a ring I kneel.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023


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Date: 9/21/2023 7:26:00 AM
Aw this is so sweet! Charming and melodic. I want more of this love story!
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Date: 9/17/2023 11:21:00 PM
A beautiful poem straight from your heart Victor….Debx
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Date: 9/10/2023 8:32:00 PM
Oh what a romantic piece and I got a little frightened he wouldn't find her when he thought she could be; “ sailed the far sea” and “ she be there in some shrub?” but you came around with a twist and a happy ending. Love it Victor
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Date: 9/10/2023 7:47:00 PM
Awe grey ending
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Date: 9/10/2023 11:03:00 AM
- Romantic poems are always a pleasure to read from you, Victor ... true love is not always easy to find :) - A wonderful poem, my friend :) - Hope you had a nice autumn weekend :) - hugs
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Date: 9/10/2023 8:36:00 AM
She would be wherever your heart is,because your heart beats one to one..A beautiful poem
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Date: 9/10/2023 12:45:00 AM
She is in your heart Victor, never more to roam, she will be there forever, and will never leave you alone. Have faith. Keep smiling. SV
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Date: 9/9/2023 5:02:00 PM
Aww…sweet! Hugs ~ Kim
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Date: 9/9/2023 4:19:00 PM
A short, but very sweet poem, Victor. Love it! :)
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Date: 9/9/2023 2:44:00 PM
Exquisitely, lovely poetry, that showcases a loving heart and a true man! Pangie xx
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Date: 9/9/2023 12:40:00 PM
So romantic Victor. I love the second stanza in particular. A very tender poem that I so enjoyed reading. Thank you for sharing. Blessings to you.
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Date: 9/9/2023 6:56:00 AM
Oh this is such an artistic and creative piece that vividly paints a beautiful tale of love yet hued with poignant shades and knitted with melancholic fragments.. When a love so dear and close, seems too far.. You've elaborated this in such a gorgeously poetic way.. Very heartfelt and evocative~
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Date: 9/9/2023 6:23:00 AM
Your writing, my friend Victor, is a work of art. , a poetic masterpiece filled with both sweetness and a touch of melancholy. Each line of this heartfelt poem carries the weighty message of "I yearn for your presence. Your choice of vivid and evocative imagery is nothing short of brilliant, leaving a lasting impact on the reader's emotions. Your words beautifully capture the essence of love and longing, painting a vivid picture of these emotions in a truly poetic way. Have a nice week-end
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Date: 9/9/2023 6:01:00 AM
At a time you longed for her presence badly, she has appeared before you like an angel. Wasting no time you have acted so quickly not to miss her again. Beautifully romantic dear Victor !
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Date: 9/9/2023 4:49:00 AM
Victor, a sweet and romantic poem with an essence of loneliness, hugs.
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Date: 9/9/2023 4:46:00 AM
You are still grieving my friend. Every line says, "I miss you" in this heartfelt poem exuding love. Memories hurt!
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Date: 9/9/2023 4:20:00 AM
Ahhh~~ How romantic. We can see beauty and routine in so many ways that reminds us of the one we love. I enjoyed reading this one today. Thank you for writing it and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 9/9/2023 2:42:00 AM
How beautiful and heartfelt is this write: I especially love the rhymes and rhythm how your poem ended. Brilliant imagery and so moving. You’ve described love and longing so poetically. Pleasure reading this
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Date: 9/9/2023 2:40:00 AM
Victor Victor Victor. Good Morning. I love this. Its most beautiful. When it comes to love everything is right with the world. May the golden pen be with you always as it is here. This was a wonderful way to start the morning. Have a beautiful day and weekend with all things good. Love Peace and Blessings always. (smiles...)
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Date: 9/9/2023 2:14:00 AM
The heart never gets enough from drinking from the well of pure love! We ever get that sweet tickle when hearing or reading on love! Reading your Finding True Love has magicly touched my heart and I truly savoured its undefined wonder! You have presented a so precious gift to your avid reader! The flow so natural, spontaneous so telling of who you are and what you are capable of! Great one! Keep it up, Victor with my sincere wishes that you are doing great! God bless you and Best regards.
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 9/9/2023 2:27:00 AM
Such comment is always appreciated.
Date: 9/9/2023 1:05:00 AM
The saga of Victor the romantic continues!
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 9/9/2023 2:28:00 AM
Wait for my dark ones :)
Date: 9/9/2023 1:04:00 AM
Very romantic verse Victor, you are the master of romance. Tom
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Date: 9/9/2023 1:01:00 AM
Very beautiful Victor, I truly enjoy reading your poetry, wish there was more poets as you. This is filled with emotion, romance and melancholy
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