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FINDING ME

To sigh deep in the interlude of time Before my world of silence closes in, As nightfall marks the ticks of birdsong’s chime And let a North Star bless my world within. The change of song brings memories’ relief Questioning not what dreams are all about; So chant dear sparrows and take flight with peace And will my wings to rise without a doubt. Then drizzles spill for moments truly felt For graced tokens of charms are now endowed; When solace glides as fragrant raindrops melt To lounge on twilight’s edge , draped by its shroud. Oh, joy so calm beneath the pewter moon A journey trailed, where dawn will find me soon. Your Best Poem Ever Contest of John Hamilton Written 3/18/2016 Re-submitted 6/18/2020

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Date: 6/22/2020 10:15:00 AM
Your expressive artistry wrapped in lush yet delicate emotional imagery is breathtaking, Nette. Exquisite enchantment! Congratulations on your excellent win in John's contest. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Date: 6/22/2020 1:47:00 AM
"solace glides as fragrant raindrops melt"...your imagery is always outstanding and blessed with emotions. Congratulations on your win Nette :)
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Date: 6/21/2020 5:31:00 AM
What a soothing flow of magical words.. Great write nette.. Congrats..
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Date: 6/20/2020 6:33:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! God bless you.
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Date: 6/19/2020 3:29:00 PM
Wow Nette you dug down deep into the archives, well your diligence was rewarded congrats on a great win!
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Date: 4/15/2016 1:18:00 PM
Beautiful sonnet Nette or should I say Sonnette? Last 2 lines are golden. Nice read!
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Date: 3/20/2016 9:17:00 PM
Wonderful write, as always ... Hugs, Bobby
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Date: 3/20/2016 4:49:00 PM
Lovely poem, Nette. Love where you took the theme. Congratulations on your well-deserved fine win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/20/2016 2:51:00 PM
Congratulations Nette :) I love the close, the last two lines tie this up wonderfully-- great work.
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Date: 3/20/2016 2:24:00 PM
Nette, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Date: 3/19/2016 9:50:00 AM
Dear Nette I love the lines in this piece, what wonderful imagery and content you've put forward for your readers to enjoy, bravo my friend, loved it completely, cheri
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Date: 3/18/2016 1:39:00 PM
"To lounge on twilight's edge"......this is a vision! Your write is dreamy! Write On Nette!...Write On! :-)
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Date: 3/18/2016 1:18:00 PM
Nette, I love this! Good luck and it looks like a winner to me!! :)-luloo
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Date: 3/18/2016 12:45:00 PM
Nette, My evenings are nothing like yours. Lovely sonnet. You just simply have that soft poetic touch. Sounds like a very lucky dawn! Peace my friend:)
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Date: 3/18/2016 12:25:00 PM
- You are located in beauty, as always Nette - Luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/18/2016 11:50:00 AM
Very lovely nette. A great place to be found.
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Date: 3/18/2016 11:00:00 AM
This is all rather nice, Nette. I read it through several times as I found it so very charming - Very soothing! A seven from me. My very best regards, Nette...And my warmest wishes. :) john
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Date: 3/18/2016 10:16:00 AM
How radiant is the quietude of your song after a day's seemingly hard grind. Your talent, poetry are multi-faceted!
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