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Finding Fun On A Budget part 1 - Swimming?

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I created three short poems together with the same theme for a contest.  However, my spouse thought that was cheating.  So, I separated them and hopefully each will stand on their own.

Swim swim swim swim swim swim swim swim swim swim swim swim swim swim swim swim swim swim swim swim swim swim swim swim swim swim Swim swim swim swim Swim swim swim Oh forget it! Swimming and showering just is NOT the same thing!

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Date: 2/20/2024 5:14:00 PM
enjoyed the structure of your poem as well as its humor. Nicely done...have a pleasant evening, Sara
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Robert Sidwell
Date: 2/21/2024 9:20:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 2/19/2024 3:29:00 PM
Love the humor of this
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Robert Sidwell
Date: 2/20/2024 9:45:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea!
Date: 2/19/2024 12:09:00 PM
Ha! Good one Robert..
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Robert Sidwell
Date: 2/19/2024 12:39:00 PM
Thanks! Based on a true story :)

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