Tim B Poet Tetractys

Finding Fantasy

"I open the door and cross the threshold of imagination"

Light
Darkness
Collision 
Fantasy world
Opens up mystical vision and then
Allows oracles to see Wilde beasts
In here only
Close the door
Behind
You

Fly fast
Fly free
Flutter
Wings
Wild eyed wanderer just with me
We are etched beautifully you see

Distant past is behind the locked door now
Eternal fantasy you dwell
So Magically

You don't have to go back ever again dear, we crossed it
The next threshold is yours to decide
So Faithfully

We are where the elves and dragons dance love
They congregate here nightly, care to dance this last one
Romantically?


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Tetractys
Tyburn
Free verse

By: Tim Bryant
For: Constance La France's Contest: "Three Gems"
Written on: 08/03/11

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Elizabeth Wesley October 15, 2011 at 2:58 PM Fantasy there to enchant the mind. Future looms with a magic spell!

James Fraser August 27, 2011 at 8:02 PM Wow factor, I have just read. It's read like a posting of a poem, a millennium from now. Superb write Tim, I like so much :)

Carol Sunshine Brown August 13, 2011 at 9:38 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in this contest sponsored by Constance La France "Three Gems" Tim. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich August 12, 2011 at 11:50 PM Nicely done, Tim. Love the line about elves and dragons! congrats on your win. I enjoyed reading this one.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 12, 2011 at 11:54 AM Congrats Tim on your amazing win with these brilliant lines of great expression in poetry luv..

Elaine George August 5, 2011 at 9:05 AM Amazing Tetractys, Tim. I also with to thank you for your kind comments on my Sonnet, 'A Gift From God'. Lainie

Chiquitachiamaka Baity August 5, 2011 at 1:57 AM This is wonderful Tim.. Really a joy to read...Best of luck in the contest

Carolyn Devonshire August 4, 2011 at 7:00 PM What a delightful flight of fantasy, tim. Now I'll always imagine you as a wild-eyed wanderer. And, yes, save that last dance for me. Love and best wishes in the contest, Carolyn

James Fraser August 4, 2011 at 6:37 PM Poetry at it's best Tim. I love the way this has been crafted, and the passion tinge to it :)

Carol Sunshine Brown August 4, 2011 at 1:15 PM Enjoyed reading your creative poetry today Tim. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. I will return to read more as time allows so keep your pen flowing. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich August 4, 2011 at 12:16 AM gosh, what a great blend, when I got to the end, I was wondering where the other poem was. But you had already used all three forms!!

Nette Onclaud August 3, 2011 at 10:58 PM you put luster on my eyes, tim...magical mood tender and inviting.. a yes for a big win!!... come join my contest??... :) huggs and see you soon! :) nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 3, 2011 at 10:11 PM Tim this is more than fantastic luv.. an opening piece with two other great forms perfectly flow into one another... good luck in the contest.. see u are just using B. now luv.. better.. since it is an open site and I never use my last name .. u never know luv.. better safe than sorry later..right????

Dr.Ram Mehta August 3, 2011 at 8:45 PM beautifully done for the contetst, Tim

Nancy Jones August 3, 2011 at 8:20 PM My toes are froze. A chillingly hot write.