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Finding Fantasy

"I open the door and cross the threshold of imagination" Light Darkness Collision Fantasy world Opens up mystical vision and then Allows oracles to see Wilde beasts In here only Close the door Behind You Fly fast Fly free Flutter Wings Wild eyed wanderer just with me We are etched beautifully you see Distant past is behind the locked door now Eternal fantasy you dwell So Magically You don't have to go back ever again dear, we crossed it The next threshold is yours to decide So Faithfully We are where the elves and dragons dance love They congregate here nightly, care to dance this last one Romantically? _______________________ Tetractys Tyburn Free verse By: Tim Bryant For: Constance La France's Contest: "Three Gems" Written on: 08/03/11

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Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 10/15/2011 2:58:00 PM

Fantasy there to enchant the mind. Future looms with a magic spell!

James Fraser

Date: 8/27/2011 8:02:00 PM

Wow factor, I have just read. It's read like a posting of a poem, a millennium from now. Superb write Tim, I like so much :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/13/2011 9:38:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in this contest sponsored by Constance La France "Three Gems" Tim. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/12/2011 11:50:00 PM

Nicely done, Tim. Love the line about elves and dragons! congrats on your win. I enjoyed reading this one.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/12/2011 11:54:00 AM

Congrats Tim on your amazing win with these brilliant lines of great expression in poetry luv..

Elaine George

Date: 8/5/2011 9:05:00 AM

Amazing Tetractys, Tim. I also with to thank you for your kind comments on my Sonnet, 'A Gift From God'. Lainie

Chiquitachiamaka Baity

Date: 8/5/2011 1:57:00 AM

This is wonderful Tim.. Really a joy to read...Best of luck in the contest

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/4/2011 7:00:00 PM

What a delightful flight of fantasy, tim. Now I'll always imagine you as a wild-eyed wanderer. And, yes, save that last dance for me. Love and best wishes in the contest, Carolyn

James Fraser

Date: 8/4/2011 6:37:00 PM

Poetry at it's best Tim. I love the way this has been crafted, and the passion tinge to it :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/4/2011 1:15:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your creative poetry today Tim. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. I will return to read more as time allows so keep your pen flowing. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/4/2011 12:16:00 AM

gosh, what a great blend, when I got to the end, I was wondering where the other poem was. But you had already used all three forms!!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/3/2011 10:58:00 PM

you put luster on my eyes, tim...magical mood tender and inviting.. a yes for a big win!!... come join my contest??... :) huggs and see you soon! :) nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/3/2011 10:11:00 PM

Tim this is more than fantastic luv.. an opening piece with two other great forms perfectly flow into one another... good luck in the contest.. see u are just using B. now luv.. better.. since it is an open site and I never use my last name .. u never know luv.. better safe than sorry later..right????

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/3/2011 8:45:00 PM

beautifully done for the contetst, Tim

Nancy Jones

Date: 8/3/2011 8:20:00 PM

My toes are froze. A chillingly hot write.