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 Victor Buhagiar and Eve Roper Collaboration 

Sometimes I woke up late and in an outrage. Alone, did I always have to take a backstage? Silently she would leave the cottage early Leaving me on my own, though I loved her dearly. Often, after my early morning meal not to steal my spouse slumber, an ideal time, I would gather my shawl and walk down a wooded path illuminated in a rainbow gown. Sometimes I remembered those serene days Wandering in the city, searching new ways, Knowing her favourite haunts to get a bargain, Or get a tasty meal in some charming garden. Often, when we lived in the city, loneliness devoured what little I had, it filled me with emptiness. Now at peace in the forest green I knelt in front of a cross in a limestone grotto praying, never at loss. Sometimes When I saw she'd gone to God knows where, Jealousy ate my innards, but I had to clear the air. For I had known her quite a while and always knew She was a kindly woman, gifted and a lover true. Often, I closed my eyes and collected past loving reveries; he'd hold my hand on serene days and we'd visit parks and galleries. He had always treated me with kindness and respect. “God, lead me to touch the brokenness of his heart and let him forget." Sometimes Things always came to a head and decided, Love was too precious that we should be divided. So I followed her as she winded her way among trees. Found her before the crucifix praying on her knees. Often, I wished he was by my side in prayer. I heard a snap, I turned to see him standing there. I brushed away my tears, reaching for him to hold my hand. I forgot all about my tears, the man I always loved was God's plan. 6/21/2018 A collaboration with Victor Buhagiar, a pleasure to have had him do this with me. Duets: I Shall Collaborate With You Poetry Contest Sponsored by: James Edward Lee Sr.

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Date: 7/31/2018 10:00:00 PM
This collaboration is so impressive! A wonderfully composed winning poem from you both. Congratulations! : )
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Date: 7/31/2018 9:59:00 PM
This collaboration is so impressive! A wonderfully composed winning poem from you both. Congratulations! : )
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Date: 7/31/2018 9:08:00 PM
A lovely poem. Congrats on your winning collaboration, Eve and Victor.
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Date: 7/31/2018 6:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. So beautiful!
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Date: 7/31/2018 4:37:00 AM
Eve and Victor, this is a magical story-poem that grabs the reader's attention in the first stanza and holds it through each exciting verse. I love it! Congratulations on your win in the contest. A fave for me. Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 6/27/2018 9:21:00 PM
Wonderful POTD, Eve! :) gw
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Date: 6/23/2018 12:36:00 PM
Eve, what a great collaboration with Victor. A belated congrats on POTD. John
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Date: 6/22/2018 8:07:00 AM
This is wonderful! A lovely read with my coffee this morning. Thank you Eve!
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Eve Roper
Date: 6/22/2018 9:41:00 AM
It is so nice hearing from you .. thank you
Date: 6/21/2018 5:47:00 PM
A great pleasure to read your piece of art in collaboration with Victor whose writes I tremendously treasure and appreciate. Thank you for sharing your work Eve. Amazingly crafted! Stay safe.
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Date: 6/21/2018 2:25:00 PM
Brilliant collaboration Eve and Victor. Tom
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Eve Roper
Date: 6/21/2018 3:54:00 PM
Thank you Tom..Hugs Eve ~' *
Date: 6/21/2018 1:39:00 PM
aww what a delightful collaboration Eve and Victor, good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Eve Roper
Date: 6/21/2018 3:53:00 PM
Thank you sweet lady,,,Hugs Eve ~' *
Date: 6/21/2018 1:31:00 PM
Lovely collaboration Eve..you and Victor put together a great poem..best for a win.
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Eve Roper
Date: 6/21/2018 3:53:00 PM
Thank you Vijay.. Victor was so easy to write with.. Hugs Eve ~' *
Date: 6/21/2018 12:52:00 PM
Great collaboration Eve you and Victor wrote a wonderful poem lyric.. i really like the repetitive often and sometimes..
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Eve Roper
Date: 6/21/2018 1:14:00 PM
Thank you Silent One, that was Victor's idea... Hugs dear friend ...

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