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Find Me In Six-Beneath the Waves

Find me beneath the waves of time Floating endlessly in the dark I struggle with life's paradigm Hear motion of its clock hands mark This ticking of time I can't flee In the end my death will find me 1/18/17 Find Me in Six

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Arlene Smith

Date: 1/23/2017 8:15:00 AM

It will in deed find us all my friend. Keep writing till the end!! Big congrats!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/22/2017 12:55:00 PM

Coming back with my congrats on this gem!

Winged Warrior

Date: 1/22/2017 8:50:00 AM

Congrats!!! my friend...god bless...^WW^

Rob Carmack

Date: 1/21/2017 11:36:00 PM

I like the mood of this, that half empty glass with a crack in it. Congrats.

Eve Roper

Date: 1/21/2017 9:19:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Frederic Hugs

Paul Callus

Date: 1/21/2017 4:00:00 PM

Aye...we surely cannot escape the ticking of time, Frederic! Those waves have no mercy. Congratulations on your deserved win. // paul

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/21/2017 2:22:00 PM

deeply lyrical, frederick so well impressed in my heart.. big congrats on your win and thanks for supporting my contest..huggs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/19/2017 9:41:00 PM

a very powerful one on death and mortality, Frederic. I like it a lot.

John Lawless

Date: 1/18/2017 7:32:00 PM

...as it will find us all Frederic.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 1/18/2017 2:08:00 PM

A beautiful poem on the passing of time and our eventual demise. Impressive as is all your poetry.