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Find Me In Six- Paradise

Find me.....In Paradise Find me in splash of raindrops lilting spree As whispering breeze, I beckon blue seas I am dew's breath, waking to tantalize My bewitching flavors fire twilight skies Where angels on swings lie in reverie In trail of footsteps to dreamland, find me! Contest Find me at six 10 syllables per line Date Jan 18 2017

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Date: 1/26/2017 7:39:00 AM
What a work of splendor!!! Congrats Sushma, for your WIN with this fine poem!!! ;-)
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Sushma A. Singh
Date: 1/26/2017 7:44:00 AM
Thank you, so much!
Date: 1/22/2017 1:02:00 PM
wow, Sushma, this one is really beautiful. Surprised to see it low! But congrats. I sure enjoyed this one.
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Sushma A. Singh
Date: 1/22/2017 7:57:00 PM
Thank you very much , Andrea. Pleased to know u enjoyed it!
Date: 1/21/2017 4:09:00 PM
You also tantalize me with the dew's breath of your words, Sushma! Well done and congratulations for this worthy win! Regards // paul
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Sushma A. Singh
Date: 1/22/2017 1:58:00 AM
Thanks!
Date: 1/21/2017 2:56:00 PM
how delicately, poetically expressed, thus deserving a win in my contest.. sweet congrats and thanks for joining, sushma..huggs
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Sushma A. Singh
Date: 1/22/2017 1:57:00 AM
Thank you!
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