Find Me Forgotten

In the rain, a dying flame,
You'll find me forgotten.
Far from home, all alone
You'll find me forgotten.

You're just not strong enough he said
I stayed silent, screaming inside my head
Teach me the moves so I will know.
I watched him walk away, I watched him go.
I could wait here forever, I could try.
Maybe he knows without him I'll die.
All he has to do is call and I'll follow
I watched him walk away, I watched him go.

In the rain, a dying flame
You'll find me forgotten
Far from home, all alone
You'll find me forgotten. 

Night is cold, raindrops and I shake
I search shadows, there must be a mistake.
He's gotta come back, we journey together
My heart is aching like this stormy weather.
I could wait here forever, I could try
Maybe he knows without him I'll die...

In the rain, a dying flame
You'll find me forgotten...
I'll wait forever, I could try
Without him, I'll die..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Gauthier Avatar
November 18, 2019 at 11:01 AM
Beautiful, Casarah. Congrats on your POTD.
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 16, 2019 at 4:22 PM
Hello Casrah Nance, so nice to meet you. when someone loves somone so strongly, and the other person does not feel the same way is rough on the person that loves the person anyway. Have a nice evening my friend.
Hamilton Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 9:41 PM
Wow 2 POTD's yours and Ricks, great song as I said before, you are back on top, way to go Cas!!
Barry-Nishanian Avatar
November 8, 2019 at 8:51 PM
POTD what an honor...congrats
Neumann Avatar
October 25, 2019 at 3:20 AM
Only a survivor could write this. Congratulations on poem of the day. Kind wishes, Kai
Rodrigues Avatar
October 24, 2019 at 6:11 AM
Fantastic lyrics, Casarah! Congratulations on POTD!
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 21, 2019 at 1:01 PM
I agree precisely with what Alexis said. Sometimes you have to let go and open your heart to someone new. Most of us have been there. Congratulations on POTD Casarah! Have a great week! : ) xxoo
Awtry Avatar
October 21, 2019 at 1:15 AM
Congratulations on your well-deserved POTD honors! What a talent you have! BRAVO!
Nance Avatar
October 21, 2019 at 10:04 AM
I appreciate that, thank you.
Allison Avatar
October 20, 2019 at 4:32 PM
such superb lyrics Cas so GOOD to see you back and LM too - I think you need to collaborate with him!:-) many congrats on POTD, hope you and the family are all well, have missed you around :-) hugs Jan xx
Nance Avatar
October 21, 2019 at 10:04 AM
Missed you too. Its been a busy summer. Things calming down now, hope to be as round. Hugs.
Y. Avatar
October 20, 2019 at 11:12 AM
WoW! Casarah, These are some deep lyrics that many can relate to. Once she realizes she is better off with out him, she'll find herself and next she will start to heal. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. PS, It's good to see you posting again. Have a wonderful day:-)Alexis
Nance Avatar
October 21, 2019 at 10:03 AM
Glad to be back and look forward to rd to having time to interact more. Thanks. Hugs
Nicole Avatar
October 20, 2019 at 8:55 AM
The heart feels every emotion, in a moment such as this. Your thoughts are beautiful and tender, all at the same time. I can see how this could inspire another. In fact, it did. Congratulations Casarah, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
Nance Avatar
October 21, 2019 at 10:02 AM
Thank you brandy
La France Avatar
October 19, 2019 at 10:28 AM
Casarah, congratulations on POTD with this terrific poem of lost love, so emotionally written, I know this feeling as I am sure many do, well done !
Nance Avatar
October 21, 2019 at 10:02 AM
Thank you very much
Michael Avatar
October 19, 2019 at 9:23 AM
Maybe he knows...maybe not...Nice write...Congratulations Casarah on POTD
Nance Avatar
October 21, 2019 at 10:01 AM
Thank you
Mcgee Avatar
October 19, 2019 at 9:01 AM
Back to give a huge congrats on this super POTD
Nance Avatar
October 21, 2019 at 10:01 AM
Thanks !
Andresen Avatar
October 19, 2019 at 8:05 AM
- Great, congratulations on yours p.o.t.d., Casarah :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Nance Avatar
October 21, 2019 at 10:00 AM
Thank you.. hugs
Poetry Avatar
October 19, 2019 at 7:17 AM
Stopping back with congratulations Cassie
Nance Avatar
October 21, 2019 at 10:00 AM
I appreciate it :)
May Avatar
October 19, 2019 at 6:59 AM
Congrats on POTD Casarah..
Nance Avatar
October 21, 2019 at 9:59 AM
Thank you
One Avatar
October 19, 2019 at 3:37 AM
A legend returns... I see how Pokemon inspired you.. great last stanza and congrats on potd...
Nance Avatar
October 21, 2019 at 9:59 AM
Hope I can stick as round this time. Thank you :)
Rose  Avatar
October 19, 2019 at 3:24 AM
Your opened the treasure chest of pain here and the mind is riveted on the heroine of the cast, Beautifully done dear Cas, xo congrats on your POTD
Nance Avatar
October 21, 2019 at 9:58 AM
Thank you so much
Cunningham Avatar
October 19, 2019 at 3:13 AM
I can see why Richard was inspired. Congratulations on POTD. Tom.
Nance Avatar
October 21, 2019 at 9:57 AM
Thank you :)
Cunningham Avatar
October 20, 2019 at 12:26 AM
I'm back now W.W., I must be losing my edge, hats off to you.
Warrior Avatar
October 19, 2019 at 8:41 AM
Beat you to it, Tommy!...must be having a good time in Turkey land lol
Warrior Avatar
October 19, 2019 at 3:09 AM
Your not forgotten this time...Congrats!! On your POTD!! Casarah...very emotive write my friend...^WW^ :o)
Nance Avatar
October 21, 2019 at 9:57 AM
:) thank you
Mcintosh Avatar
October 18, 2019 at 10:46 PM
A wonderful song. It should be on some winning list. It sings... bless you with many more wonderful words. Gina
Nance Avatar
October 21, 2019 at 9:56 AM
Thank you for your sweet words
Mcgee Avatar
October 18, 2019 at 9:14 AM
In the rain we will wash away our pain...not to be forgotten but to mourn...and reborn. The pain here pierces a reminder of all my loves lost.
Nance Avatar
October 21, 2019 at 9:55 AM
Aww hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
October 18, 2019 at 8:52 AM
Thanks, your inspiration garnered me a POTD. Hugs Rick.
Lamoureux Avatar
October 17, 2019 at 7:05 PM
Ha ha, that makes this all the more great. Do drop by and read my response to your poem.
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