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Find Me Forgotten

In the rain, a dying flame, You'll find me forgotten. Far from home, all alone You'll find me forgotten. You're just not strong enough he said I stayed silent, screaming inside my head Teach me the moves so I will know. I watched him walk away, I watched him go. I could wait here forever, I could try. Maybe he knows without him I'll die. All he has to do is call and I'll follow I watched him walk away, I watched him go. In the rain, a dying flame You'll find me forgotten Far from home, all alone You'll find me forgotten. Night is cold, raindrops and I shake I search shadows, there must be a mistake. He's gotta come back, we journey together My heart is aching like this stormy weather. I could wait here forever, I could try Maybe he knows without him I'll die... In the rain, a dying flame You'll find me forgotten... I'll wait forever, I could try Without him, I'll die..

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Date: 11/18/2019 11:01:00 AM
Beautiful, Casarah. Congrats on your POTD.
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Date: 11/16/2019 4:22:00 PM
Hello Casrah Nance, so nice to meet you. when someone loves somone so strongly, and the other person does not feel the same way is rough on the person that loves the person anyway. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 11/14/2019 9:41:00 PM
Wow 2 POTD's yours and Ricks, great song as I said before, you are back on top, way to go Cas!!
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Date: 11/8/2019 8:51:00 PM
POTD what an honor...congrats
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Date: 10/25/2019 3:20:00 AM
Only a survivor could write this. Congratulations on poem of the day. Kind wishes, Kai
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Date: 10/24/2019 6:11:00 AM
Fantastic lyrics, Casarah! Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 10/21/2019 1:01:00 PM
I agree precisely with what Alexis said. Sometimes you have to let go and open your heart to someone new. Most of us have been there. Congratulations on POTD Casarah! Have a great week! : ) xxoo
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Date: 10/21/2019 1:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your well-deserved POTD honors! What a talent you have! BRAVO!
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Casarah Nance
Date: 10/21/2019 10:04:00 AM
I appreciate that, thank you.
Date: 10/20/2019 4:32:00 PM
such superb lyrics Cas so GOOD to see you back and LM too - I think you need to collaborate with him!:-) many congrats on POTD, hope you and the family are all well, have missed you around :-) hugs Jan xx
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Casarah Nance
Date: 10/21/2019 10:04:00 AM
Missed you too. Its been a busy summer. Things calming down now, hope to be as round. Hugs.
Date: 10/20/2019 11:12:00 AM
WoW! Casarah, These are some deep lyrics that many can relate to. Once she realizes she is better off with out him, she'll find herself and next she will start to heal. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. PS, It's good to see you posting again. Have a wonderful day:-)Alexis
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Casarah Nance
Date: 10/21/2019 10:03:00 AM
Glad to be back and look forward to rd to having time to interact more. Thanks. Hugs
Date: 10/20/2019 8:55:00 AM
The heart feels every emotion, in a moment such as this. Your thoughts are beautiful and tender, all at the same time. I can see how this could inspire another. In fact, it did. Congratulations Casarah, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
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Casarah Nance
Date: 10/21/2019 10:02:00 AM
Thank you brandy
Date: 10/19/2019 10:28:00 AM
Casarah, congratulations on POTD with this terrific poem of lost love, so emotionally written, I know this feeling as I am sure many do, well done !
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Casarah Nance
Date: 10/21/2019 10:02:00 AM
Thank you very much
Date: 10/19/2019 9:23:00 AM
Maybe he knows...maybe not...Nice write...Congratulations Casarah on POTD
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Casarah Nance
Date: 10/21/2019 10:01:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 10/19/2019 9:01:00 AM
Back to give a huge congrats on this super POTD
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Casarah Nance
Date: 10/21/2019 10:01:00 AM
Thanks !
Date: 10/19/2019 8:05:00 AM
- Great, congratulations on yours p.o.t.d., Casarah :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Casarah Nance
Date: 10/21/2019 10:00:00 AM
Thank you.. hugs
Date: 10/19/2019 7:17:00 AM
Stopping back with congratulations Cassie
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Casarah Nance
Date: 10/21/2019 10:00:00 AM
I appreciate it :)
Date: 10/19/2019 6:59:00 AM
Congrats on POTD Casarah..
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Casarah Nance
Date: 10/21/2019 9:59:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 10/19/2019 3:37:00 AM
A legend returns... I see how Pokemon inspired you.. great last stanza and congrats on potd...
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Casarah Nance
Date: 10/21/2019 9:59:00 AM
Hope I can stick as round this time. Thank you :)
Date: 10/19/2019 3:24:00 AM
Your opened the treasure chest of pain here and the mind is riveted on the heroine of the cast, Beautifully done dear Cas, xo congrats on your POTD
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Casarah Nance
Date: 10/21/2019 9:58:00 AM
Thank you so much
Date: 10/19/2019 3:13:00 AM
I can see why Richard was inspired. Congratulations on POTD. Tom.
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Casarah Nance
Date: 10/21/2019 9:57:00 AM
Thank you :)
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 10/20/2019 12:26:00 AM
I'm back now W.W., I must be losing my edge, hats off to you.
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Date: 10/19/2019 8:41:00 AM
Beat you to it, Tommy!...must be having a good time in Turkey land lol
Date: 10/19/2019 3:09:00 AM
Your not forgotten this time...Congrats!! On your POTD!! Casarah...very emotive write my friend...^WW^ :o)
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Casarah Nance
Date: 10/21/2019 9:57:00 AM
:) thank you
Date: 10/18/2019 10:46:00 PM
A wonderful song. It should be on some winning list. It sings... bless you with many more wonderful words. Gina
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Casarah Nance
Date: 10/21/2019 9:56:00 AM
Thank you for your sweet words
Date: 10/18/2019 9:14:00 AM
In the rain we will wash away our pain...not to be forgotten but to mourn...and reborn. The pain here pierces a reminder of all my loves lost.
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Casarah Nance
Date: 10/21/2019 9:55:00 AM
Aww hugs
Date: 10/18/2019 8:52:00 AM
Thanks, your inspiration garnered me a POTD. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 10/17/2019 7:05:00 PM
Ha ha, that makes this all the more great. Do drop by and read my response to your poem.
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