Finches

breeze rustling softly sunrays filter through the clouds ~ finches warble cheer 5th April 2023 For Tania Kitchin's "A new Nature themed haiku" contest

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/11/2023 10:06:00 AM

So sweet! Congrats, Joanna

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/9/2023 10:59:00 AM

- Congratulations on your lovely winning haiku, Jo :) - hugs

Tania Kitchin

Date: 4/9/2023 8:09:00 AM

Jo, a sweet haiku, love the finch imagery, congratulations on your winning placement!

Panagiota Romios

Date: 4/8/2023 5:40:00 PM

Phenomenal Pangie co

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 4/7/2023 7:10:00 AM

Sweet one Jo. Quite the peaceful image :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/6/2023 10:42:00 AM

Your "finches" is a wonderful Haiku write. Have a blessed day...........

Michelle Smith

Date: 4/5/2023 10:01:00 PM

:) i love standing near a tree full of singing birds, taking a break on a walk, just watching them flitter from branch 2 branch, talking 2 each other, singing like you describe :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/5/2023 12:43:00 PM

very nice one, Joanna.

Daniel Turner

Date: 4/5/2023 7:42:00 AM

Getting a great visual with this one, Joanna:)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/5/2023 6:18:00 AM

An image in every line and together they form a lovely haiku--finches warble cheer.