Finches


breeze rustling softly
sunrays filter through the clouds ~
finches warble cheer


5th April 2023


For Tania Kitchin's "A new Nature themed haiku" contest

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Andrea Dietrich

April 11, 2023 at 10:06 AM

So sweet! Congrats, Joanna

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 9, 2023 at 10:59 AM

- Congratulations on your lovely winning haiku, Jo :) - hugs

Tania Kitchin

April 9, 2023 at 8:09 AM

Jo, a sweet haiku, love the finch imagery, congratulations on your winning placement!

Panagiota Romios

April 8, 2023 at 5:40 PM

Phenomenal Pangie co

Linda Alice Fowler

April 7, 2023 at 7:10 AM

Sweet one Jo. Quite the peaceful image :)

Paula Goldsmith

April 6, 2023 at 10:42 AM

Your "finches" is a wonderful Haiku write. Have a blessed day...........

Michelle Smith

April 5, 2023 at 10:01 PM

:) i love standing near a tree full of singing birds, taking a break on a walk, just watching them flitter from branch 2 branch, talking 2 each other, singing like you describe :)