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FINALLY

Finally we were alone Bridesmaids; best man all gone home We eyed the gifts piled on the rug Bill looked at me, I gave a shrug Tomorrow would be soon enough Tonight we'd focus just on us And like a flame that grew and grew Our burning kisses did ensue And soon our clothes were tattered rags Phone ringing, door bell; distant nags Somehow our room we gained at last Observed by just the mirror glass And though you'd like to know much more Friend, this is where we shut the door RETA PRUITT August 23, 2016

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Date: 10/4/2018 12:07:00 AM
Very nice. Brings back memories of my wedding night!
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Date: 9/6/2018 11:25:00 AM
Hi Reta, Cute! True love and romance - let it live on forever. Jennifer Proxenos.
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Date: 9/15/2018 10:24:00 PM
Jennifer, I appreciate your kind comments and your visit and I wish you all the best, Reta.
Date: 9/5/2018 3:00:00 PM
This was well written and keep them coming as everything you write is great to read, thanx.
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Date: 9/4/2018 6:58:00 PM
Reta: Well done. Thank you for sharing. Your timing is great, I'd rather not know your eventual fate. :o) Keep them coming and sharing with all of us on the soup. oldbuck
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Reta Pruitt
Date: 9/15/2018 10:37:00 PM
Hi Buck, what can I say ( the soup is best served hot)lol. Blessings and best wishes, Reta.
Date: 8/23/2016 9:28:00 PM
lol, thats cheeky, ..... then what?
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Date: 8/24/2016 12:41:00 AM
Ah...laughter, what would we do without it. Thanks for stopping by Lewis...very sweet of you