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03/29/24

Coagulation starter

9th place.

Contest by Matt Caliri

FINALLY Finally my blood started to coagulate My strong will- power succeeded to regulate Sudden shock pushed me to merge in mud of sorrow. Couldn't control my pain through continuous blood flow. Sinking slow to the abyss of despondency. Failed to stop this irresistible tendency. A ray of hope flashed as my supreme consciousness got associated with my firm self confidence. My inherent strength was awakened to formulate. FInally my blood started to coagulate.

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Date: 4/16/2024 5:51:00 PM
Great job finishing 8th out of 31 entries! What struck me was your usage of the opening line again for the last line, it fit perfectly! Well done!
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