Finality

How oft had I slipped in life,
Sliding into slimy oblivion, 
Until my spirit was crushed 
Almost beyond repair.
 
Yet I learned the hard way
To fight back and win.
To see the truth in your mortal deceit
To admit you do not deserve
The compassion and lust that
You crave so much for.
 
You hide behind long faces 
And mimic with your shaking hands
As if you're in despair;
Misplace your voice with floods of sorrow
To hide your ugly nature of abuse.
 
Stop this illusion, fly away from me
Seek other pastures, 
For I cannot abide your cheating tone,
Or the deception written on your face,
Not anymore.   Must I succumb to you?
 
Now I am whole, alone and worried
But am determined to survive your loss.
It's hard I know to linger
Into the lonely, dreadful, sleepless night.
To wait for the promised dawn of a new life,
A dawn that seems so far away.
But I'm determined to wait.
 
For when you're gone I'll find asylum
In peace and harmony and truth
And live the simple life I had once treasured
Once more I'll smile and laugh 
But I shall love no more.
 
FICTION
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Rodrigues Avatar
October 2, 2025 at 6:20 PM
The angst of a difficult relationship, yet on the other side peace can be found.
Rolland Avatar
September 30, 2025 at 5:10 PM
some sadness prevails ; when hope disappears, i really wish you to meet love again, as we say in french " tant qu'il y a de la vie, il y a de l'espoir"
Rodgers Avatar
September 30, 2025 at 11:18 AM
Hello Victor, it’s raw, unflinching, and full of hard-won strength. The honesty and clarity in your lines carry so much power, and that closing note of determination and self-preservation really stayed with me. Fierce and moving work, my friend. Autumn Blessings, Victor, Daniel
George Avatar
September 30, 2025 at 1:42 AM
"To wait for the promised dawn of a new life, A dawn that seems so far away. But I'm determined to wait."...... This willingness to endure and wait for a better tomorrow is the secret of success. Never grow weak. Circumstances may not be favorable... still with determination, face life. Beautifully written dear Victor.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 5:50 PM
your poem is filled with both sadness and determination. Your words touched my heart. Thank you for sharing,
Kitchin Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 4:20 PM
Victor, a great emotive poem. Glad to know it's fiction.
Goldsmith Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 12:36 PM
I enjoyed reading your powerful "Finality" write/story. Great Ending... Glad you added FICTION on the bottom. Have a wonderful day/week writing away............
Greenhough Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 9:22 AM
The title is perfect for your words. The obvious is difficult to accept when love is involved. Your verse holds enlightened truths.
DiMino Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 5:40 AM
"Stop this illusion, fly away from me Seek other pastures," -- there are many Control-freaks, masterful at using emotions for power and self profit. Well done, Victor. Hang in there my friend.
Andresen Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 4:07 AM
- A truly sad poem, Victor... glad it's a fictional poem - Have a lovely week :) - hugs
Poet Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 3:15 AM
It's heartbreaking when love goes south. Victor, I enjoy reading your imaginative work.
Edmonds  Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 1:23 AM
It’s so sad when love turns sour. I enjoyed your fictional write Victor… Beryl
Dietrich Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 12:45 AM
Oh my. The tone here is so somber but also I like the determination displayed . I hope you are well, Victor. You are such a a kind person and a staple here at Soup
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