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Final Thoughts

A kettle of vultures spiral
above the undulating waves of 
hot air over Baghdad
like rotor blades thudding through 
vaporless skies
dry as sand scoured bones
stripped pearl by razor beaks.

Cutting through the 
lung scalding crest 
in July, a Blackhawk helicopter engorged 
with gun strapped men, 
praying, chatting, reading letters 
from home of weddings, picnics and 
walks in the park— their last musings.

A flash from ground scrubs 
heroes from the desert scape of 
tangerine and plum-hued sunrise.

In the silent, slow-moving space
between children rising from the ground 
shaking off the percussion — whooping and
dancing on dirt mottled feet and

pieces of smoking metal with 
burning innards of 
Blackhawk scudding the sand, 

inkish feathers without birds flurry to the 
earth, drifting in front of smudged 
faces of locals like the grit 
blasted names of soldiers  
on the Vietnam Veterans Memorial Wall
mirrored in my sodden eyes.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 12/28/2017 3:59:00 AM
I like your writing style...Your descriptions were fantastic...All the best Marsha
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Marsha Smith
Date: 12/28/2017 11:28:00 PM
Thank You, Arturo Michael. I appreciate your encouragement.

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