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Not many would pay attention Even fewer would care If I went beyond pretension And did as I dare If I let go of ambition And released my tortured soul No glory or recognition Playing the undertaker's role I wish not any sympathy For I've created my own hell Look at me with no empathy Let no tears leave their trail In days you'll learn My presence wasn't vital You'll carry on with no concern For this friend once suicidal My hand clasps tight Around the grip of this gun At last, I'll be alright In a world I'm forever done The taste of cold steel With my mind on one track In a few seconds a life surreal No care to turn back In memory the laughs we had The times we would smile Life wasn't always this bad But got worse by the mile.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/16/2016 7:02:00 PM
Nice to see again, Gary....skat
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Date: 5/29/2014 12:37:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Gary :) - I choose your first written poem - Well done !! - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/28/2014 6:47:00 PM
Gary, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Gary Hatfield
Date: 5/28/2014 8:14:00 PM
Thank you skat! I look forward to becoming familiar with this site and those folks on it.
Date: 5/28/2014 5:35:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Gary. This is a powerful, well written poem. I believe you will find much support here. Keep writing; comment on the poems of other writers and most of them will return the favor. Best wishes.
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Gary Hatfield
Date: 5/28/2014 8:40:00 PM
Thank you Faye. This is my first visit to here and first time to share anything I've written.

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