Diane Locksley Poet Monorhyme

Final Moments' Thoughts

When the Reaper comes calling at your door
  As you're struggling with chest pains on the floor
    And the angst of helplessness strikes your core
      That's when you realize you could have loved more



For Brian Strand's End Rhyme challenge

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Carol Sunshine Brown June 30, 2011 at 5:04 AM A belated congratulations Diane on your win in Brian Strand's "One Single Four Line" contest. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud May 24, 2011 at 9:22 PM chilling! big kusos to you for garnering a great spot in the contest, diane..:) huggs

Andrea Dietrich May 24, 2011 at 2:07 PM oh a sad one here. I much enjoyed seeing this on the winners' list. A big congrats to you, Diane.

Ralph Taylor May 24, 2011 at 11:36 AM Congrats on your win, Diane. Great write. Nice job. xxxRalph

Francine Roberts May 24, 2011 at 11:23 AM awesome poem, congrats on your win Diane..............Francine

Jack Horne May 24, 2011 at 10:09 AM Very true, I'd imagine. Many congrats on your win, Diane : )

Carolyn Devonshire May 24, 2011 at 9:07 AM Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest, Diane! Couldn't agree more with the message here. Love, Carolyn

May 23, 2011 at 12:06 PM The last line in this one leaves the reader with something to take away from the poem and ponder about. Best wishes in the contest. Thank you for your well wishes with my book. I really appreciate your encouragement. Karen

Barbara Gorelick May 22, 2011 at 8:35 PM Wow, what a message. Good one. BG