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Final Letter

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She sits. She writes. She feels lost and alone. Clenched fists. Scary night. Passion turned to stone.
I tore up a book of lost verses written to my lover, since she left there are no more journals to discover. Humbled emotions penned with a quill on red paper, the blood bled dry because I just couldn't save her. I tore up her final letter written out of despair, it may be ripped into pieces but her memory's still there. Disoriented words making no sense cuz' intoxication, so confusing we could not understand the interpretation. “Good bye to my family, I can't handle anymore pain”, she left this world cleanly, but I can't erase her stain. I can't believe five years ago today she was found, in front of a fountain sleeping peacefully on the ground. She was feeding the ducks bread, we found remnants, for so long I carried too much anger and resentment. Under a blue spruce pine is where she took her last breath, No words can explain what we've been through since her death. I tore up her final letter written out of despair, look at her picture once more, lacerated beyond repair. I never want to read that filthy missive for as long as I live, She was so exhausted, eyes closed, with nothing left to give. ***Five years ago tonight we found my sister who had been missing for three months. Along with her, came her good-bye letter.*** For The Contest, Any Poem Not For A Contest, Ever, Sponsor, Broken Wings Date Written: March 17, 2016

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Date: 5/18/2016 8:05:00 AM
It touches really deep to the core of the heart... Congrats Laura, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 5/17/2016 1:43:00 PM
I'm heartbroken for you. So sorry, Luloo. Congrats on the write.
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Date: 5/16/2016 10:49:00 AM
Painful and beautiful,thanks Laura!
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Date: 5/16/2016 9:16:00 AM
Luloo, congratulations on your First Place win in the 'Any Poem Not For A Contest, Ever' contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/16/2016 9:09:00 AM
- Congratulations on your wonderful poem, Laura :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/15/2016 5:35:00 PM
lacerated beyond repair! Great line in a wonderful write! Congrats Laura
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Lu Loo
Date: 5/15/2016 6:47:00 PM
thank you Brian :)-luloo
Date: 3/17/2016 10:57:00 PM
Wrenching write Luloo. Peace be with you love and your lover. Tomorrow is the next best day to be alive. Live it to the hilt. Love, Charlie
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Lu Loo
Date: 3/18/2016 7:44:00 AM
Thanks Charlie, when I said my "lover" I meant my dear sister, thats how close we were :)-thank you again -luloo
Date: 3/17/2016 10:41:00 PM
Laura, I feel for you, as I lost my father as well as my best friend to this disease. I suffer as well, have for nearly 60 years now...and it never gets any easier for me. For you, I hope you can find forgiveness... and in your forgiving find some kind of peace in the decision she made for herself...it is a healing that must be made before any understanding can be experienced by those left behind. Bless you, and my heart goes out to you. J.
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Lu Loo
Date: 3/18/2016 7:43:00 AM
Thank you J, (soupmail) -luloo
Date: 3/17/2016 10:31:00 PM
Really Sorry Laura, so glad you could bring it here, it's beautiful.
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Date: 3/17/2016 10:27:00 PM
Hi Laura, Wow, what an intense, moving poem. Just powerful with exploding imagery. I hope it's not actually true though, but it kind of sounds too real to be fictional. Either way, an outstanding write. And if it is true, I'm sorry for your loss. Cheers, Brian
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Lu Loo
Date: 3/18/2016 7:33:00 AM
Thanks Brian, it's about my sister, I called her my "lover" because we were super close...:)-luloo

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