Demetrios Trifiatis Poet Epigram

Final Goodbye

She told him her final goodbye

And

The sun of happiness was eclipsed by her departure

Thus

Leaving him in perpetual darkness! 








© Demetrios Trifiatis
    26 October 2015

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Michael Tor October 27, 2015 at 2:14 PM Very Nice Demetrios sad but true. Blessings my friend. Demetrios Trifiatis October 27, 2015 at 3:56 PM Yes, my friend, Michael, sad bud sadness, unfortunately represents a great part of life! Happy you are back! Thank you!

Monterey Sirak October 27, 2015 at 8:14 AM Wow! Vivid images on loneliness and desolation. Demetrios Trifiatis October 27, 2015 at 3:54 PM We all have been through those moments, dear Monterey! I do not wish anyone to be lonely! thank you for your lovely comment!

Eileen Manassian October 26, 2015 at 1:18 PM Very sad, my dear poet...Very sad. Filakia...Hope all will be well. Demetrios Trifiatis October 27, 2015 at 4:50 PM Well, my dearest if sadness was absent from life so would be joy! Thank you for your delightful visit!

Richard Lamoureux October 26, 2015 at 9:48 AM So true. Demetrios Trifiatis October 26, 2015 at 11:23 AM Thank you for your gracious comment, my friend, Richard!

Richard Lamoureux October 26, 2015 at 9:33 AM A sad one Demetrios. Demetrios Trifiatis October 26, 2015 at 9:37 AM Part of life is sad, my friend, Richard. so we shouldn't overlook this, for many of our friends are passing through difficult moments! Thank you!

Constance La France October 26, 2015 at 8:26 AM Demetrios, oh so deep and sad, I like it 7 ~ Demetrios Trifiatis October 26, 2015 at 9:37 AM Thank you Broken Wings for your visit and kind comment!

Miraj Raha October 26, 2015 at 8:15 AM Nicely executed Sir. Demetrios Trifiatis October 26, 2015 at 8:29 AM Miraj, my good friend, how delightful your visit! Thank you!

Anne-Lise Andresen October 26, 2015 at 8:11 AM - Yes, I understand very well ..... It had been dark .... black !!! - hugs and thank you for being here // Anne-Lise :) Demetrios Trifiatis October 26, 2015 at 8:17 AM "My dearest friend, Anne-Lise, thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment! "

Lin Lane October 26, 2015 at 7:58 AM few words ~ much sentiment, Demetrios Lin Lane October 26, 2015 at 8:22 AM How could I not agree? a kiss, a caress, the look of love in one's eyes...those things do speak volumes. Demetrios Trifiatis October 26, 2015 at 8:18 AM Sentiments, as you know, are not in need of any words: take a kiss or a caress they are silent but speak volumes! I hope you agree! Thank you, dear Lin, for your beautiful visit and comment!

Anna Hopper October 26, 2015 at 7:22 AM Simple yet brilliant words! Demetrios Trifiatis October 26, 2015 at 7:50 AM Your visit a delightful event, dear Anna! Thank you for the lovely comment!