Tahera Mannan Poet Free verse

Final Good Bye

Soon these fleeting hours be done
The cool grave waits expectantly
Hopelessly my life pleads
To lie in his arms again
My weak head bends in gratitude
He carried my burdens and fears
This bright world tempts me dearly
When the time to finally leave is here
To walk one last time with him
To see him cherish me closely
And banish dark memories with a kiss
For him something special
My heart wishes to do
Just before saying good bye

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Carol Sunshine Brown February 25, 2011 at 6:55 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Walayee Whitlock's contest "If I Only Had 1 Day To Live". Long list of winners so glad to see your name among them Tahera. Love, Carol

Robert Pettit February 22, 2011 at 10:17 PM Congratulations on attaining honorable mention in Walayee's contest with this entry, Tahera.

John Freeman February 22, 2011 at 9:35 AM Awesome job Tahera good to see your most worthy poem's success.. Congratulations on your poem's honored HM. Agape, Moses

Fabiyas M V February 19, 2011 at 9:15 AM Congratulations,Tahera! well deserved win.

Joyce Johnson February 18, 2011 at 9:09 PM A loving last wish. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Dr.Ram Mehta February 18, 2011 at 6:06 PM Congratulations on the well deserved win the contest of walayee, Tahera

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 18, 2011 at 5:57 PM Congrats Tahera on your HM in Lay's contest with this touching entry my friend.. enjoy your special honor with luv..

Sara Kendrick January 24, 2011 at 10:57 AM Good to know that one walks with Him here and now ..Then eternal walking..Enjoyed ..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Wilma Neels January 24, 2011 at 5:52 AM Tahera, if I am not mistaken this is for Lay's contest hey? It is quite beautiful, you have captured it perfectly.. All the best for the contest, love Wilma

Ravindra K Kapoor January 24, 2011 at 4:33 AM As a poem it's a beautiful sad write but if there is any reality behind such depressions be strong my friend. After every dark night comes the dawn of hope and happiness to shower it's love on the one who keep waiting and trying till the darkness persist. Keep your hopes always alive even if there is nothing to find. Love and best wishes...Ravindra...Tahera Mannan

Joyce Johnson January 23, 2011 at 10:36 PM Very sad Tahera. Thank you for your comments. Love, Joyce