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Final Good Bye

Soon these fleeting hours be done The cool grave waits expectantly Hopelessly my life pleads To lie in his arms again My weak head bends in gratitude He carried my burdens and fears This bright world tempts me dearly When the time to finally leave is here To walk one last time with him To see him cherish me closely And banish dark memories with a kiss For him something special My heart wishes to do Just before saying good bye

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/25/2011 6:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Walayee Whitlock's contest "If I Only Had 1 Day To Live". Long list of winners so glad to see your name among them Tahera. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/22/2011 10:17:00 PM
Congratulations on attaining honorable mention in Walayee's contest with this entry, Tahera.
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Date: 2/22/2011 9:35:00 AM
Awesome job Tahera good to see your most worthy poem's success.. Congratulations on your poem's honored HM. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/19/2011 9:15:00 AM
Congratulations,Tahera! well deserved win.
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Date: 2/18/2011 9:09:00 PM
A loving last wish. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/18/2011 6:06:00 PM
Congratulations on the well deserved win the contest of walayee, Tahera
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Date: 2/18/2011 5:57:00 PM
Congrats Tahera on your HM in Lay's contest with this touching entry my friend.. enjoy your special honor with luv..
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Date: 1/24/2011 10:57:00 AM
Good to know that one walks with Him here and now ..Then eternal walking..Enjoyed ..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 1/24/2011 5:52:00 AM
Tahera, if I am not mistaken this is for Lay's contest hey? It is quite beautiful, you have captured it perfectly.. All the best for the contest, love Wilma
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Date: 1/24/2011 4:33:00 AM
As a poem it's a beautiful sad write but if there is any reality behind such depressions be strong my friend. After every dark night comes the dawn of hope and happiness to shower it's love on the one who keep waiting and trying till the darkness persist. Keep your hopes always alive even if there is nothing to find. Love and best wishes...Ravindra...Tahera Mannan
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Date: 1/23/2011 10:36:00 PM
Very sad Tahera. Thank you for your comments. Love, Joyce
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