Emile Pinet Poet Quatrain

Final and Forever

Lured by oblivion, you
dream of breathing your last breath.
Yet life's seldom found wanting
when fairly weighed against death.

Final and forever form
a lasting combination.
And suicide marks your soul
for eternal damnation.

Overwhelmed by fickle fate,
you submit to pain's embrace.
And masking reality;
hide behind a smiling face.

Haunted by unfulfilled dreams,
your life starts to fall apart.
But only time can numb the
pain that is breaking your heart.

And yet, under all that hurt,
there lies a flicker of hope.
And believing in yourself,
you find the courage to cope.


(Quatrain)


6/20/2015

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Diane Christian June 21, 2015 at 4:20 PM That is very good, its true, id bad times we find ways to cope, mine God, just holding on in faith always pulls me through never fails, God bless you Emile Pinet June 22, 2015 at 8:38 AM Thanks Diane, I appreciate your friendly words of support. Emile.

Afolabi Muideen June 21, 2015 at 1:45 AM This is extremely brilliant penned Emile, we may experience something hurt but when to cope with it to the end it will be sweet like honey. Thanks for the inspiration piece, it enjoyable.........A.M. Emile Pinet June 21, 2015 at 9:15 AM Thanks Afolabi, I appreciate your friendly visits. Emile.

Alexis Y. June 21, 2015 at 12:43 AM Emile, this is well written piece. You skilfully conveyed a message of hope. Great job! :) Alexis Emile Pinet June 21, 2015 at 9:16 AM Thanks Alexis, I appreciate your support. Emile.

Constance La France June 20, 2015 at 1:53 PM Emile, a very inspiring write full of hope, a sweet 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, starry Emile Pinet June 21, 2015 at 9:16 AM Thanks Broken, I always appreciate your visits. Emile.

Anne-Lise Andresen June 20, 2015 at 1:32 PM - Its all about gathering strength after grief and take new courage - A great poem, Emile - hugs and happy weekend // Anne-Lise :) Emile Pinet June 21, 2015 at 9:17 AM Thanks Anne-Lise, I always appreciate your friendly visits. Emile.

Eileen Manassian June 20, 2015 at 1:19 PM :) A lovely write this is, Emile. True...while there is life, there is hope. Don't much like thinking about the damnation bit. Hugs Emile Pinet June 20, 2015 at 1:32 PM Thanks Eileen, I appreciate your input. Emile.