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Final and Forever

Lured by oblivion, you dream of breathing your last breath. Yet life's seldom found wanting when fairly weighed against death. Final and forever form a lasting combination. And suicide marks your soul for eternal damnation. Overwhelmed by fickle fate, you submit to pain's embrace. And masking reality; hide behind a smiling face. Haunted by unfulfilled dreams, your life starts to fall apart. But only time can numb the pain that is breaking your heart. And yet, under all that hurt, there lies a flicker of hope. And believing in yourself, you find the courage to cope. (Quatrain) 6/20/2015

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Date: 6/21/2015 4:20:00 PM
That is very good, its true, id bad times we find ways to cope, mine God, just holding on in faith always pulls me through never fails, God bless you
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Date: 6/22/2015 8:38:00 AM
Thanks Diane, I appreciate your friendly words of support. Emile.
Date: 6/21/2015 1:45:00 AM
This is extremely brilliant penned Emile, we may experience something hurt but when to cope with it to the end it will be sweet like honey. Thanks for the inspiration piece, it enjoyable.........A.M.
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Date: 6/21/2015 9:15:00 AM
Thanks Afolabi, I appreciate your friendly visits. Emile.
Date: 6/21/2015 12:43:00 AM
Emile, this is well written piece. You skilfully conveyed a message of hope. Great job! :) Alexis
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Date: 6/21/2015 9:16:00 AM
Thanks Alexis, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 6/20/2015 1:53:00 PM
Emile, a very inspiring write full of hope, a sweet 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, starry
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Date: 6/21/2015 9:16:00 AM
Thanks Broken, I always appreciate your visits. Emile.
Date: 6/20/2015 1:32:00 PM
- Its all about gathering strength after grief and take new courage - A great poem, Emile - hugs and happy weekend // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/21/2015 9:17:00 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise, I always appreciate your friendly visits. Emile.
Date: 6/20/2015 1:19:00 PM
:) A lovely write this is, Emile. True...while there is life, there is hope. Don't much like thinking about the damnation bit. Hugs
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Date: 6/20/2015 1:32:00 PM
Thanks Eileen, I appreciate your input. Emile.

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