Filtered Springs Fall

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a parable of thought

Don't be deluded to think I am wrong because some of it in reality is right Sad sorrowful souls misunderstand the greatness of Mercy Feeling wounds draws us to His Passion You pierce this heart with gentle loving forgiveness words recalled that sin is a double edged diamond knife which cuts deep where we love the darkness That which drags us away from the light tortured blindness their lessons will be learned

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Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 1/4/2019 12:34:00 PM

Hi Liam!:)) Wow! A very beautiful, n' outstanding spiritual poem filled of faith n' light, you've written here ,my dearest friend Liam.Amen!Enjoyed it!!Very beautifully written!Just awesome!:))Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + + !A fav ! You have a heart of gold!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray a lot that you're okay in everything, Liam.Wishing you always all the very best in everything you do, n' please take good care of yourself,okay, Liam!:) Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/4/2019 12:14:00 PM

- A great poem with deep emotions, dear friend Liam - Best wishes and warm hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/4/2019 9:11:00 AM

Deep and powerful thoughts, Liam..your message reverberates.