Filling In Some Pieces

We rarely get to see our friends
When they are off at work.
We hear about their colleagues
Or their boss who is a jerk.

But picturing their office
Or wherever they’re employed
Isn’t something we spend time on –
(Not unless you’re Dr. Freud.)

So tonight was most intriguing.
I’d occasion to attend
A memorial to Marilyn,
My dear departed friend.

It was organized by workmates,
Many whom she’d known for years.
Though I recognized their names,
We’d had quite different careers.

I heard supervisors’ stories
And from buyers in her field,
Nodding knowingly as all her traits
Were laughingly revealed.

They supplied some missing pieces
Of the life of hers I’d known,
For we each have an impression
Of our friends that’s ours alone.

Though the puzzle’s not completed – 
That’s impossible to do – 
I increased my understanding
Of the Marilyn I knew.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Bickerstaffe Avatar
December 30, 2015 at 5:40 PM
What a bittersweet piece this is... and it's so true, we hardly ever actually KNOW the people we work with, and it's only on the occasion of their passing that, with the comments made by our co-workers, we're able to fill in the blanks. BRAVO Ilene! Best wishes, Keith
Johnson Avatar
September 15, 2015 at 9:39 PM
Colleagues and friends. Hmmm. Lesson learned. I wish you God's grace and comfort in your time of sorrow ilene. Peace. :)
Dietrich Avatar
September 10, 2015 at 12:12 AM
a lovely way to pay tribute to someone, to write a poem like this one. Thanks for your comment on the Fritzes. I am glad you thought it was hilarious.
Bauer Avatar
September 10, 2015 at 10:33 AM
thanks, andrea! i'm still coming to terms with the loss of my good friend. it helps to get things in writing...
Muideen Avatar
September 9, 2015 at 9:27 PM
A well and a beautiful descriptive, I love how this was constructed..eloquent and excellent............A.M.
Bauer Avatar
September 10, 2015 at 10:33 AM
thank you so much afolabi! i am touched by your comment...
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