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Filling In Some Pieces

We rarely get to see our friends When they are off at work. We hear about their colleagues Or their boss who is a jerk. But picturing their office Or wherever they’re employed Isn’t something we spend time on – (Not unless you’re Dr. Freud.) So tonight was most intriguing. I’d occasion to attend A memorial to Marilyn, My dear departed friend. It was organized by workmates, Many whom she’d known for years. Though I recognized their names, We’d had quite different careers. I heard supervisors’ stories And from buyers in her field, Nodding knowingly as all her traits Were laughingly revealed. They supplied some missing pieces Of the life of hers I’d known, For we each have an impression Of our friends that’s ours alone. Though the puzzle’s not completed – That’s impossible to do – I increased my understanding Of the Marilyn I knew.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/30/2015 5:40:00 PM
What a bittersweet piece this is... and it's so true, we hardly ever actually KNOW the people we work with, and it's only on the occasion of their passing that, with the comments made by our co-workers, we're able to fill in the blanks. BRAVO Ilene! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 9/15/2015 9:39:00 PM
Colleagues and friends. Hmmm. Lesson learned. I wish you God's grace and comfort in your time of sorrow ilene. Peace. :)
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Date: 9/10/2015 12:12:00 AM
a lovely way to pay tribute to someone, to write a poem like this one. Thanks for your comment on the Fritzes. I am glad you thought it was hilarious.
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 9/10/2015 10:33:00 AM
thanks, andrea! i'm still coming to terms with the loss of my good friend. it helps to get things in writing...
Date: 9/9/2015 9:27:00 PM
A well and a beautiful descriptive, I love how this was constructed..eloquent and excellent............A.M.
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 9/10/2015 10:33:00 AM
thank you so much afolabi! i am touched by your comment...

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