Brenda Chiri Poet Rhyme

Fill Your Soul

As we sit under the stars 
Let my fingertips trace 
your scars
You are perfect in my eyes
Let me hear your sweet sighs
Show me your deep fractures
Seems my soul you've captured
Im loving your imperfections 
They show me the right direction
Let my joy fill your soul 
My tears fill each crack in your
your being

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John Hamilton April 27, 2020 at 3:46 PM Back for a second helping of this one, enjoyed even more 2nd time round! Brenda Chiri April 28, 2020 at 4:47 AM Thank you so much John! I have not been well lately so I has RNT been able to write lately! Thank you once again!

Kai Michael Neumann December 31, 2019 at 5:09 AM Wonderful ... Brenda Chiri December 31, 2019 at 5:27 PM Thank you so much my friend!;)

Edmund Strempfl December 13, 2019 at 6:13 PM A very heart warming poem and enjoyable Brenda Chiri December 14, 2019 at 1:07 PM Edmund thank you so much!;)

Line Gauthier December 9, 2019 at 7:51 AM Poignant. Congrats on your POTD, Brenda. Brenda Chiri December 9, 2019 at 1:38 PM Thank you so much line!;)

Alexis Y. December 7, 2019 at 10:03 AM WoW! Brenda, This is so well written and romantic! If someone gave these words on a card, I'd be a very happy woman. Congratulations on getting the poem day. It was well deserved. Oh this is a fav by the way! Have a great day my friend:-) Alexis Brenda Chiri December 7, 2019 at 9:21 PM Alexis thank you so much!;)

John Hamilton December 3, 2019 at 5:36 PM Back with congrats on this beautiful POTD a worthy winner! Brenda Chiri December 4, 2019 at 8:38 AM Thanks John your comments inspire one to do better than then the last one ! So thank you ! ;)

Gordon Mcconnell December 3, 2019 at 3:46 PM Such a lovely penned love piece Brenda, truly inspiring with great imagery along the way. I was needing this as each line seems a struggle to pen at present but we persevere on. Blessings and hugs, Gordon Brenda Chiri December 4, 2019 at 8:30 AM

John Gondolf December 3, 2019 at 8:17 AM True love accepts all imperfections. Congrats on POTD, Bren. Hugs, John Brenda Chiri December 3, 2019 at 8:43 AM So very true John! Thank you my dear friend!;)

Anne-Lise Andresen December 3, 2019 at 2:53 AM - Congratulations on your beautiful p.o.t.d., Brenda :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Brenda Chiri December 3, 2019 at 8:42 AM Anne-Lise thank you so ver much! Your comments so appreciated!;)

Maria Williams December 3, 2019 at 1:03 AM I love the way you've written this Brenda, Congrats on your POTD....Maria Hugs Brenda Chiri December 3, 2019 at 8:41 AM Ah Maria so nice to see you and thank you so much!;) your comments are so appreciated!;)thank you!;)

Brandy Nicole December 2, 2019 at 10:36 PM Beautiful in every way, these words from your heart. Seeing someone perfectly, through imperfections. That's true love. Congratulations Brenda, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy Brenda Chiri December 3, 2019 at 8:29 AM Brandy thank you for your wonderful comment !;) what a wonderful thing to say!;)

Constance La France December 2, 2019 at 9:37 PM Brenda, congratulations on having your beautiful poem selected as POTD, enjoy the honor ~ Brenda Chiri December 3, 2019 at 8:36 AM Thank you so much dear heart and I am more then overjoyed trust I appreciate the honor! Like I am honored and humbled by your comment!;)

Gershon Wolf December 2, 2019 at 9:12 PM You have done it agan! Another romantic treasure...This time, POTD. Bravo, Brenda! Cheers, Gershon Brenda Chiri December 3, 2019 at 8:34 AM Gershon you just bringing a smile to my face is the best win of all!;) Thank you so very much!;)

Warren Doll December 2, 2019 at 4:32 PM Loving imperfections is a true love. Congratulations for POTD, Brenda. An instant Fav for me. Warmest wishes Warren Brenda Chiri December 3, 2019 at 8:32 AM Warren thx so much!;) Much appreciated!;)

BE Bailey December 2, 2019 at 1:23 PM Wow. Congrats on POTD Brenda. Very well written. Love it. Hugs B Brenda Chiri December 3, 2019 at 8:30 AM Thank you so very much!;)

Na Na December 2, 2019 at 1:00 PM Congrats Brenda on getting POTD Brenda Chiri December 3, 2019 at 8:28 AM Gregory you are too kind thank you!;)

Phil Capitano December 2, 2019 at 10:54 AM Another stellar poem full of soulful romance. Congrats, Brenda, on POTD. Brenda Chiri December 3, 2019 at 8:27 AM Phil you are far too kind ;) thank you so very much!;)

Vijay Pandit December 2, 2019 at 9:50 AM Congrats Brenda on poem of the day--a lovely romantic write. Brenda Chiri December 3, 2019 at 8:27 AM Vijay thank you so very much;)

Winged Warrior December 2, 2019 at 8:18 AM Crackle - lacking good, Bren...your poetry soars, my sissy from another multi-dimensional poetic realm...runs in the twisted dimensional talented family, I guess lol...(((Congrats!! On POTD!!))) all my love bro bro :o) Brenda Chiri December 3, 2019 at 7:42 AM Aha bro bro lol thank you soo much;) twisted running in the twisted dimension realm oh yes!' Lmao but there is so much twisted in this one too! ;) hugs your twisted but lovable sissy!;)

Joseph May December 2, 2019 at 7:57 AM Wonderful poem Brenda..Congrats on POTD.. Brenda Chiri December 3, 2019 at 7:39 AM Thank you so much joseph! How have you so very much ;)

Charles Messina December 2, 2019 at 7:23 AM Beautiful Brenda.. Congratulations on POTD. x Charlie Brenda Chiri December 3, 2019 at 7:37 AM Charlie thank you souch for yoin

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart December 2, 2019 at 7:14 AM Love heals, my takeaway from this sweet poem. Congratulations on POTD Brenda! Warm hugs :))) xomo! Brenda Chiri December 3, 2019 at 7:36 AM Thanks so much Maureen ! I have been missing your comments! Again thx so much!;(

Sandra Adams December 2, 2019 at 4:15 AM Congratulations on your POTD :) Brenda Chiri December 3, 2019 at 7:34 AM Thank you sandy your too kind!;)

Tom Cunningham December 2, 2019 at 3:11 AM Love overcomes everything Brenda, beautifully written. Congrats on POTD. Tom Brenda Chiri December 3, 2019 at 7:34 AM Tom thank you so very much! I always enjoy your visits!;)

John Hamilton December 1, 2019 at 9:33 AM This is magnificent writing Brenda...one of your best...hard to tell...everything you write is great...but...this is a fave for me! Brenda Chiri December 3, 2019 at 7:32 AM Thx so much John! It means slot to hear your to hear you say that! ;)

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