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Fill Your Soul

As we sit under the stars 
Let my fingertips trace 
your scars
You are perfect in my eyes
Let me hear your sweet sighs
Show me your deep fractures
Seems my soul you've captured
Im loving your imperfections 
They show me the right direction
Let my joy fill your soul 
My tears fill each crack in your
your being

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John Hamilton

Date: 4/27/2020 3:46:00 PM

Back for a second helping of this one, enjoyed even more 2nd time round!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 4/28/2020 4:47:00 AM

Thank you so much John! I have not been well lately so I has RNT been able to write lately! Thank you once again!

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 12/31/2019 5:09:00 AM

Wonderful ...

Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/31/2019 5:27:00 PM

Thank you so much my friend!;)

Edmund Strempfl

Date: 12/13/2019 6:13:00 PM

A very heart warming poem and enjoyable

Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/14/2019 1:07:00 PM

Edmund thank you so much!;)

Line Gauthier

Date: 12/9/2019 7:51:00 AM

Poignant. Congrats on your POTD, Brenda.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/9/2019 1:38:00 PM

Thank you so much line!;)

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/7/2019 10:03:00 AM

WoW! Brenda, This is so well written and romantic! If someone gave these words on a card, I'd be a very happy woman. Congratulations on getting the poem day. It was well deserved. Oh this is a fav by the way! Have a great day my friend:-) Alexis

Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/7/2019 9:21:00 PM

Alexis thank you so much!;)

John Hamilton

Date: 12/3/2019 5:36:00 PM

Back with congrats on this beautiful POTD a worthy winner!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/4/2019 8:38:00 AM

Thanks John your comments inspire one to do better than then the last one ! So thank you ! ;)

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 12/3/2019 3:46:00 PM

Such a lovely penned love piece Brenda, truly inspiring with great imagery along the way. I was needing this as each line seems a struggle to pen at present but we persevere on. Blessings and hugs, Gordon

Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/4/2019 8:30:00 AM

John Gondolf

Date: 12/3/2019 8:17:00 AM

True love accepts all imperfections. Congrats on POTD, Bren. Hugs, John

Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/3/2019 8:43:00 AM

So very true John! Thank you my dear friend!;)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/3/2019 2:53:00 AM

- Congratulations on your beautiful p.o.t.d., Brenda :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/3/2019 8:42:00 AM

Anne-Lise thank you so ver much! Your comments so appreciated!;)

Maria Williams

Date: 12/3/2019 1:03:00 AM

I love the way you've written this Brenda, Congrats on your POTD....Maria Hugs

Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/3/2019 8:41:00 AM

Ah Maria so nice to see you and thank you so much!;) your comments are so appreciated!;)thank you!;)

Brandy Nicole

Date: 12/2/2019 10:36:00 PM

Beautiful in every way, these words from your heart. Seeing someone perfectly, through imperfections. That's true love. Congratulations Brenda, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy

Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/3/2019 8:29:00 AM

Brandy thank you for your wonderful comment !;) what a wonderful thing to say!;)

Constance La France

Date: 12/2/2019 9:37:00 PM

Brenda, congratulations on having your beautiful poem selected as POTD, enjoy the honor ~

Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/3/2019 8:36:00 AM

Thank you so much dear heart and I am more then overjoyed trust I appreciate the honor! Like I am honored and humbled by your comment!;)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/2/2019 9:12:00 PM

You have done it agan! Another romantic treasure...This time, POTD. Bravo, Brenda! Cheers, Gershon

Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/3/2019 8:34:00 AM

Gershon you just bringing a smile to my face is the best win of all!;) Thank you so very much!;)

Warren Doll

Date: 12/2/2019 4:32:00 PM

Loving imperfections is a true love. Congratulations for POTD, Brenda. An instant Fav for me. Warmest wishes Warren

Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/3/2019 8:32:00 AM

Warren thx so much!;) Much appreciated!;)

BE Bailey

Date: 12/2/2019 1:23:00 PM

Wow. Congrats on POTD Brenda. Very well written. Love it. Hugs B

Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/3/2019 8:30:00 AM

Thank you so very much!;)

Na Na

Date: 12/2/2019 1:00:00 PM

Congrats Brenda on getting POTD

Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/3/2019 8:28:00 AM

Gregory you are too kind thank you!;)

Phil Capitano

Date: 12/2/2019 10:54:00 AM

Another stellar poem full of soulful romance. Congrats, Brenda, on POTD.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/3/2019 8:27:00 AM

Phil you are far too kind ;) thank you so very much!;)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/2/2019 9:50:00 AM

Congrats Brenda on poem of the day--a lovely romantic write.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/3/2019 8:27:00 AM

Vijay thank you so very much;)

Winged Warrior

Date: 12/2/2019 8:18:00 AM

Crackle - lacking good, Bren...your poetry soars, my sissy from another multi-dimensional poetic realm...runs in the twisted dimensional talented family, I guess lol...(((Congrats!! On POTD!!))) all my love bro bro :o)

Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/3/2019 7:42:00 AM

Aha bro bro lol thank you soo much;) twisted running in the twisted dimension realm oh yes!' Lmao but there is so much twisted in this one too! ;) hugs your twisted but lovable sissy!;)