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"A filigree of snow is fragile and lovely, but even more beautiful when they are etched together." ~ quote by poet Fine filigree motifs are being drawn on my window Painted by the wind, holding a brush dipped in snow Each pattern a fragile engraving in a different design White roses climbing a trellis on their flowering vine Soon, the frosted filigree will occlude the landscape Snow covered hills blanketed by an alabaster drape Never quite as beautiful as the white laced tapestry created as if embroidered with snowflake majesty My fingertips trace the threads as if they were fine lace A meshwork of embellished tatting, frozen in place Chilled, for a while, is this frost on each glass pane until sunlight reigns. Such is their plight, their bane Elegant scrollings that sparkle like diamonds, bright Each delicate filigree will quickly disappear from sight when radiant beams come alive at the waking of dawn to become nothing more than puddles watering my lawn February 18, 2023 Writing Challenge -F Words Contest Sponsored by Constance La France

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Date: 2/22/2023 12:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful story/write/quote. Have a great/blessed day writing away........................
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Date: 2/21/2023 11:18:00 AM
Delicate as icy filigree on a windowpane Lin. Just lovely. You have found wondrous beauty in the middle of winter. Congratulations on your win. Blessings.
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Lin Lane
Date: 2/21/2023 11:44:00 AM
Thank you, Sam.
Date: 2/21/2023 7:54:00 AM
Congratulations on this winner in Constance's contest. Way to go. Sara
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Lin Lane
Date: 2/21/2023 10:40:00 AM
Thanks, Sara.
Date: 2/21/2023 6:29:00 AM
I can nearly see you tracing the cold window, with its spectacular etchings! A fine write! Congratulations, Lin!
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Lin Lane
Date: 2/21/2023 10:40:00 AM
Thanks a lot, Kim.
Date: 2/21/2023 2:24:00 AM
Lin, a beautiful poem and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge F Words, well done, I love your quote also, blessings, Constance
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Lin Lane
Date: 2/21/2023 10:40:00 AM
Thank you for honoring my poem, Constance.
Date: 2/20/2023 5:40:00 PM
So delicate and delightful! Congratulations on your win Lin!
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Lin Lane
Date: 2/21/2023 10:39:00 AM
Thanks, Linda.
Date: 2/20/2023 4:12:00 PM
Lin, beautiful winter imagery, congratulations on your first place win!
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Lin Lane
Date: 2/21/2023 10:39:00 AM
Thanks, Tania.

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