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Fighting Sharks - Dance of The Seas

( from my work in progress' Dance of the Seas' ) Draft 1 verse 1 Step into the water going under searching further left or right verse 2 Holding my own deep in the Ocean spend time following your both alike chorus mimic the rules language toys left or right conditions of the night verse 3 Holding their own, here we go again taking my hand and following orders its just language toys we're both alike chorus 2 mimic all your rules going left or right stepped into the water again deep so deep of Blue Seas. Bridge verse Holding my own. always wont go again to follow taking my own rules in Blue Sea's Deep in my own Ocean. taking my own hand in Blue Seas making my own rules its just language toys, in Blue Seas musical outro

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Date: 12/26/2024 6:00:00 AM
Very cool song lyrics. Got a melody in mind?
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Jacqueline Elston
Date: 12/26/2024 6:12:00 AM
Thanks Tom, iv got loads more as l write a lot of lyrics. but so far i'm having trouble getting the beat count right on this. l want it to be a 8 bar beat but may have to re arrange some of the lyrics, so ll leave if for a few days and look at it again afresh, but the theme wont change.

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