Fighting Chance

I read about this true story - it happened in Elizabethan England - and was so 
upset that I needed to write this poem to get it off my chest. It's been published 3 
times.

FIGHTING CHANCE

The mobs that packed the place
Were slavering for blood;
They sniffed it in the air
And, drooling, watched it flood.

The bears and bulls were dead;
A horse was dragged to fight,
It whinnied, reared and bucked,
Its nostrils flared in fright.

The pack was at the horse,
Their hungry jaws like traps;
That brutal, bloody scene 
Was met with cheers and claps.

The gore of horse and dogs 
Had turned the dust red-brown; 
Those snarling dogs no match 
For hooves that thundered down.

The dogs lay scattered round;
The roaring crowd was awed;
But then demanded more:
A second pack was called.

The horse, insane with fear,
Exhausted, fought to live;
The dogs were fresh, but he
Should have no more to give.

His will to live was strong;
The dogs were on his back;
Defeating mastiff jaws,
He tossed and killed that pack. 

The rabble drunk on blood,
Addicted to it then,
Still called for more; the horse 
Was hacked to death by men.


Jack Horne

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 4/19/2011 1:40:00 PM
Can you believe it and people still persist in say man is given biblical dominion over all, not me to me all creatures of God's creation are equally valuable in God's eyes man just wrote the "books" and gave himself the authority to do what ever he darn well pleases with everything. VERY good write congrad's. Light & Love
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Date: 4/19/2011 1:09:00 PM
Hey Jack, congratulations on your win ;)
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Date: 4/19/2011 11:46:00 AM
Congratulations on the ninth place win in the contest, jack
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Date: 4/19/2011 7:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's contest "Razzle, Dazzle" Jack. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/19/2011 4:46:00 AM
The crulest animal on earth is HUMAN! Many congrats on your win, Jack. Lainie
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Date: 4/18/2011 8:45:00 PM
Congrats Jack on your success in my contest luv.. appreciate your constant support always .. my winners list is finally posted to view luv..
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Date: 4/16/2011 8:55:00 AM
Startling events, Jack. Animal abuse is a serious crime now, but long ago during the Elizabethan Age it seems such practices were acceptable. After the horse died, I bet some of these torturers turned on each other in their quest for more blood. Very well written, my friend. I was telling other friends of your talent last night and mentioned how refreshing it is to read poetry by someone who understands the proper use of grammar and punctuation. Always a fan! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/16/2011 5:41:00 AM
I'm touched by this sad but lovely poem. Well done, Jack
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Date: 4/15/2011 6:52:00 PM
Brutal that was. And I like how you showed the horror of it. Great writing there. Your footle was very fun. I leaned about them from a contest given months ago. They are the smallest of rhymed poems. One day traveling a long time to Iowa for a wedding, I came up with around 200 of them and have posting them periodiically in groups of about ten. it's fun. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 4/15/2011 6:21:00 PM
Very very sad and moving account, jack
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Date: 4/15/2011 1:00:00 PM
This is too horrible to imagine, Jack!! And some say there's no such place as Hell!? Pitting animals against each other is beyond evil as they are in our care. This makes me extremely sad as horses and dogs are my favorite amongst animals! Though saddened by this, I thank you for sharing this. I'll never forget this! Have a good weekend. Annalise
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Date: 4/15/2011 12:57:00 PM
Watch the real news and you'll see men n women undergoing the same just for pleasure in Libya etc ! But it don't make it any better do it ?
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